whoa id definately agree with john there. You've improved even more! my favorutie part was from "then i shall make you see! tht your hopes are nothing, nothing but a mere illusion!" you put alot of emotion in to tht which was wicked! good job man
Skoh that was a lot better man. Amazing. I think my only critique was the last line. You kinda paused to long, but everything else was just amazing man. I love it ^_^
whoa id definately agree with john there. You've improved even more! my favorutie part was from "then i shall make you see! tht your hopes are nothing, nothing but a mere illusion!" you put alot of emotion in to tht which was wicked! good job man
BennyBanardo 8 months ago
Skoh that was a lot better man. Amazing. I think my only critique was the last line. You kinda paused to long, but everything else was just amazing man. I love it ^_^
drakekid7 8 months ago