Salone Education and Entrepreneurship Development Program
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great script and well-spoken.
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I changed the setting to "Private" thinking you might have forgotten to do this. Change it back to "Public" if you want anyone on the Internet to be able to see it.
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How can they contact you? Email, phone, website?
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Excellent!
(Where is the 'pitch,' the 'ask'? What do you want and expect, from whom?)
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Chris, you did a great job. You explain things well, you are very composed in front of the camera. You give all the information, and are very confident in your presentation. I would echo the comments below and encourage a new choice of song (though we all love that one), because it has been used so much, and also, the breaking up of your comments -- or have your voice play-over during other footage/photos. Overall, great job!
MSFS540 4 years ago
Hi Chris,
Good script and good natural style - not too dramatic, but collected and focused. I'm afraid I disagree about the music - this track has been used too many times by others to have the desired spine tingle effect - and it has nothing to do with Sierra Leone.
Similar to others (and no doubt something you know), you need to break up the talking head to keep people interested.
Tom
MSFS540 4 years ago
Music is great; might fade it out completely at some point (and then reprise at end). A little "too much of a good thing"?
MSFS540 4 years ago
Some more on Team would be good, and/or Partner orgzn (shown and/or mentioned in passing).
Do you have pics of you in Sierra Leone? (E.g., is that you at 0:08-0:10? If so, freeze on it a little longer.)
MSFS540 4 years ago
First thoughts:
Problem. Solution. Exciting and emotional music - stolen from those clips shown in class :) I think - and a solid opening/conclusion. One thing I noticed was missing was a section on the team, which could be easily added. Also, (like the mistake I made with my own pitch) it might make your pitch even stronger if you throw in some pictures or somehow vary or change the setting so it isn't a single shot in one location/background.
-Josh
MSFS540 4 years ago
I love the music! Very stirring! I would increase the frame size of your image ... currently makes you look like a talking passport photo. Really well done script! images are great! -Jess :)
MSFS540 4 years ago