Blind (It's Not Everything) - Original Song

This song came surprisingly easy to me not only lyrically, but musically too. I always struggle with thinking up of music for my lyrics. I guess God just really wanted this song to get out there :)

This song is still in its early stages, seeing as how I only wrote it about a week ago. I want to add a bridge or something to change it up, but who knows...maybe it's fine the way it is! lol.

Blind (It's Not Everything)

When will you realize
There's more to love than this?
I try to make you understand
It's not all about the kiss.

Screaming in my head,
The things I never said.

You don't have to get lucky
To make things right.
You don't have to think like that
In the middle of the night.
It's not that important,
You're so blind.
Just realize
It's not everything.

When will you wake up
And see what you've done?
You left me in the dark,
And now I can't find the sun.

Screaming in my mind,
You're so blind.

You don't have to get lucky
To make things right.
You don't have to think like that
In the middle of the night.
It's not that important,
You're so blind.
Just realize
It's not everything.

When will I finally see
That you'll never learn?
I've been holding on way too long,
I'm none of your concern.

I don't have to worry
About making things right.
You'll learn for yourself
When you're lonely at night.
It's not that important,
You're so blind.
Just realize
It's not everything.

Category:

Music

Tags:

• anna
• pesut
• blind
• it's
• not
• everything

[lusoyong]

Nice song

I'll support ur future works!!

[sendai0529]

good song

thank you

see you

[tepishane]

nice!

[ursafied]

完璧な

[szomething]

I think you did very well on the chorus. "Lucky / to" seemed too far split, but you did a great job with "that / in". The pause makes sentence at "important / you're", but then it seems like too much when at the end of the same line there's another break.

I loved the different lines in the final chorus, but the last four lines seemed repetitive. Same vocals, same guitar.

Again, thanks for sharing! ^_^

[szomething]

I like this song as well, but as you said it sounds unfinished. The first four-line verse was well done in context of the song, the second one felt a little slower, and the third was incredibly slow in comparison to both the other short verses and the rest of the song.

[yumivo]

good but you real nide some enather stile

[angelediavolo]

good song

but girl, you need to find another style or genre, something less boring and more rythmic lol

[musicfamily]

This is a very good composition. 5 stars!

[yoursandmine951]

this 1 suits u better (good job)

[punisher1067]

WOW and More WOW!

[Auron255]

sugoi!! *_* good song! xDDD