EverYoung .wmv

Hit thumbs up,please, if you like this response to the Kina Grannis 'write a song' vids. Like quite a few I had no luck at all with the moderator on Kina's homepage . It just kept rejecting me and my scribblings. I loved the melody and pre-chorus/chorus , and decided I had to come up with something sort of finished , just for my own satisfaction.
So I decided to fiddle with this windows movie editor thing I found on my computer. This is the first time I have used it , and didn't really have the first idea what I was doing. It may come out as a bit of a rough old 'hack and slash', but I think it gives the general impression of itself.
I hope there is no problem regarding uploading it ...
The images are , obviously , Kina. The track itself is assembled from 'trimmed' sections , and arranged into an attempt at how I envisaged a version of the song might go.
The lyrics are , I suppose , personal to me in many ways. They may still need some fine tuning , but I decided to try and upload it anyway.
If you like the 'feel' of it your thumbs up will be welcomeas I am curious to see how it is received....thanks all

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Music

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• write
• song
• competitionKina
• Grannis
• acoustic
• guitar
• soul
• music
• spirituality
• kina
• grannis
• cowrite
• co-write
• songwriting
• stairwells
• singer

[rapNemesisist]

that's beautiful . really really like it. Much better than most of the dross about these days and in the comp.

nice one ...

Shame the whole thing won't get sung by KG. Your version would suit her voice perfectly.

Never mind m8 find singer and do yours.

[MrShamblingalong]

tthis way better than wwots winning. Song will turn out to be a right barbiechant.

I ask you - 'feel the love it leaks'- what is it a soundtrack fo a cheap porno.UGHHH, sounds like snail trails and gloop. horrible.Bad luck , I think the way they didnt change the voting soon as they knew moderator thing was broken shows it was a fix. Some were already chosen, otherwise why make it so only some could enter.

Hard luck chap

[TheAmazingbffs]

this is AWESOME!!!! it should be a hit GUARANTEED.

[MrShamblingalong]

like I said.I thiink it was fixed from day 1. You taken my sayin so down wont change that.

I have said it on other folks pages as well, you cant take them comments down.

checkout the thumbs ups on the posts you killed. 1 or 2 agreed with me

[MrShamblingalong]

loved it. this 1.Just looked at 1st verse etc that won. Ramblin rubbish compared to this.It will turn out a Barbiiesong the way its going. 'feel the love it leaks'- sounds like a scene from a cheap n nasty porno.all snail trails and gloop.awful.maybe fixing the broken voting would have stopped the whole thing lookin fixed.

I think some of the cowriters were already chosen .Why else did they keep using a voting they knew wasn't working.ard luck chap.

[MrShamblingalong]

loved it. this 1.Just looked at 1st verse etc that won. Ramblin rubbish compared to this.It will turn out a Barbiiesong the way its going. 'feel the love it leaks'- sounds like a scene from a cheap n nasty porno.all snail trails and gloop.awful.maybe fixing the broken voting would have stopped the whole thing lookin fixed.

I think some of the cowriters were already chosen .Why else did they keep using a voting they knew wasn't working.ard luck chap.

[MrShamblingalong]

loved it. this 1.

Just looked at 1st verse etc that won. Ramblin rubbish compared to this.

It will turn out a Barbiiesong the way its going. 'feel the love it leaks'- sounds like a scene from a cheap n nasty porno.all snail trails and gloop.awful.maybe fixing the broken voting would have stopped the whole thing lookin fixed.

I think some of the cowriters were already chosen .Why else did they keep using a voting they knew wasn't working.

Hard luck chap.