Mr Majestic's First Stand Up
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That was funny , But it was that kind jimmy carr laughter , shouldnt laugh but its funny to cross the line sometimes. The line about fancying your mom was very laugh out loud comedy
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i was the guy with the camera. i thought it was hilarious.
your move.
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Thats a bit harsh dude, people are laughing. He got the best laughs of the night from what i heard.
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I don't know you so I can give a more honest review, its not very good man. I understand this was your first attempt and people don't know how hard stand up is, but your act just seemed a little forced. Obsene humor can be funny but just because something is obsene doesn't make it funny the bit about not being a masaganist but stabbing a woman for having a vagina...not funny dude, just awkward and dumb. You can even tell the guy with the camera didn't think it was funny.
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Lol, i forgot about this, whens the next show?
I laughed, you succeeded.
russell111 1 year ago
@russell111 Thank you!
fastville 1 year ago
(cont) I'm not trying to be a jerk and I don't even care if you delete this after reading this, so long as you read it. My suggestion, as someone who just started doing stand up as well, scrap your act and write a whole new one. If you think this is the best you can do you should probably forget about stand-up.
meb6216 2 years ago
No problem and thank you for the advice. I know what you mean about the forcedness. I'm not going to delete what you said because it's less positive than the other comments. Can you send me a link to see or hear some of your own material?
fastville 2 years ago
Good job fella!!!
stopmeltingme 3 years ago
hey thanks for the support
fastville 3 years ago