lodestones - original song

this is totally still in progress and the recording might be a little bit weird with my two voices.. but even if it´s so imperfect i still was curious what some of you might think about it.. so your feedback is highly appreciated!
here are the lyrics:

LODESTONES

Too many miles away but inside the same room
Scratching on the surface, trying to presume
Our hearts like two lodestones pushing away what seems close

Redirection is only a yellow traffic sign
It was never that easy to let go of what´s behind
I want my feelings to be a map I know how to unfold

We´ve been framed with the stories of both our pasts
And we tried to escape them by running too fast
can you hold my breath now so I can start reading yours

Redirection is only a yellow traffic sign
Is it really that hard to let go of what´s behind?
Streets fade into nothing at the end of the page
Cause maps are just colours lined up on a print
like their streets we don´t know where our stories will end
so i´ll paint us some milestones and remember what feels close

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[kayenne1]

thank you! what a nice hypothetical offer...:)

[skyzefawlun]

There are few people if any that I subscribe to who I am as excited to see post new videos as you....

This was simply beautiful. It's those little imperfections that make it what it is: honest. Your music unlike so much of the noise pollution out there really sounds like it's made just for you. That's something pretty special you know... I'm just so glad that you've decided to share it with us ;)

[kayenne1]

thank you you much for your kind words, they really mean something to me....-kayenne

[JohnProsserVideo]

wonderful lyrics and your voice is beautiful as always

[kayenne1]

thank you john, i´m always happy to hear from you...

[Mikaerupochi]

not a girl‥sorry,

{You are artist.

[cernuto]

Beautiful... Please post more as the music and lyrics and so introspective. You have a gift that needs to be heard so keep on writing the songs within and without.

[LemonOperations]

wow.. this is really good! Like, "Saved it onto my playlist" good ^_^

subbed =P

[nearsilence]

Amazing, emotive

[deeryker]

Wahhhhhhhhh,,,,another visit,,,,,really love this.You are so good

[WilliamBryanRagland]

It is absolutely gorgeous.

[haveyouseenher]

I really like this. The metaphors don't feel contrived at all. The lyrics take you away from the mundane everyday and bring you to somewhere where it feels nice to be and where you see things from a different perspective. It's an emotional song that stays far away from hysterics and what not. Very powerful indeed.

[vbrockladyv]

I always get so excited when I see that you have something new up! It's great as always. I don't know what to say that doesn't sound trite or lame. When I get rich, I'm totally hooking you up with studio time so that you can have the best of everything to work with! The world would be a much better place with less of them and more of you.