All That I Am (Original)

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Uploaded by on Jan 23, 2009

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The First of its kind!

This is an original song that I co-wrote & arranged with a friend (Cygnum), and performed by yours truly (guitar too). It was sort of rushed--in fact the entire process took about 7 hours (writing, recording, the works). We had to meet a deadline; it was intended as a birthday present. Still I think it turned out pretty well. =)

Since this is my first original song, I'd really appreciate any and all comments on it. I hope you guys like it! Peace! And thanks for everyone's support!

Enjoy!

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Shoutouts to Cygnum & my cousin Pauee!

Lyrics:
I've been thinking about this girl today
Is she doing ok
Did she wake up teary-eyed or did she put on
a beautiful smile

Wish the light from the window
gently touches her face
while the warmth of the morning sky
strokes her hair as she wakes

Chorus:
(And) My hands out, for you
to reach your heart
Want so much to, hold you
Like well never be apart
You were all that I am right from the start

I am dreamin about this girl right now
And remembering how
I was lost in confusion 'til she took my hand
made me understand

I miss her so, I can't let go.

(Chorus)

I've been thinking about this girl today, is she doin' okay...

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  • hey, its chris from emy and the band, youve got a reeeele nice voice, i quite like listenin to it

    but no1 wants to listen to a guitar thats out of tune, uve gotta be so on top of that,

    only criticism on this one, and its not even criticism, i wud have liked to hear this in a higher part of your range, maybe stick a capo higher up and move into a more fitting part,

    very nice song though, keep them comin ill always be aeround to have a listen

    chris x

  • Hey Thanks for pointing that out!! hmmm...I gotta be more careful next time then...maybe get one of those digital tuners too...=P thanks though! really good advice! Peace!

  • all that i am..

  • ...uhm....yup that's the title...=) thanks for the comment!

  • wow...two "great song" comments...consecutively...=P Thanks Guys!!

  • OMFG! Wow! I dont know what to say! You seriously made me tear up! I love it! Your awsome and ugh!!! You have a beautiful breath taking voice! You go! fuck! lol

  • XD lol you made my day Ranman! Ur reaction is priceless...thanks again!

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  • You already know how much I enjoy this :D. Great work! Haha much better than anything I've written that's for sure! You're really coming along and it just makes me excited for what I know is ahead of you. Keep doing what you love--no one's gonna punish you for it. ;)

  • I LOOOOVE IT! I LOVE YOUR VOICE!

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  • this is really a great song...

  • :DDDD HOLY MOOLY! this is awesome! haha may i have the lyrics?! haha

  • I love this song! I favorited a long time ago and listen to it all the time! Love your original and would love to hear more! :)

  • I loved it!! Amazing voice again!! =D Your going somewhere!!!

  • im definitely gonna try to learn this song! tabs?

  • if a guy makes me a song this beautiful then. . . wow. that was great. :]

  • awesome song, A++

  • whoever you wrote this song for must be pretty happy xD

  • love the song

    i admire the voice

    its amazing :]

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