Sabaq - Short Film (Climax) by Kamal Krishna

Sabaq (Lesson)
This is a trailer of my upcoming short film. What you see is the climax part of the same.

Problem is i don't like the story we have in mind right now.

I'd like to ask you friends if you can come up with a great story for the climax you have just seen? Can you come up with the flashback?

*This is not a commercial project, and no profits will be made through this film.

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[Oneesan]

simply amazing. though at the burning I thought I'd hear more screams.

how about a story of the psychopathic killer killing homeless/mentally ill people (all that moaning reminds me of such people-I know it's from the cloth around his mouth) to 'cleanse ' the cities.

[lamaksstalk]

yea dubbing was bad.. for the first short film.

I appreciate ur idea for the story, i have a similar story in mind, something like saw... but was looking at making something totally different. Will work on the script and keep u posted. Thanks a ton mate.

[madapalli]

I dont know whether u completed ur short film. I have a story line in mind :

You can show that there is a person who tries to be successful in life but always a person tries to make him a failure...He will get so frustrated that he will decide to kill him...After a long thought process...he decides to kill him...BUt the fact is...he actually kills the pessimist in him...

[pmandiga]

this movie is creepy, that means you did an amazing job=)

congrats!

[halkatgp]

nicely made

[Oneesan]

no, thank you.