Paranormal-SHORT FILM (2009)

Synopsis: This interesting and in-depth movie from director, Jake Revill follows a young school boy who is troubled by his past and begins to relive the same day over and over and over and over and over and over and over...

Credits:
DIRECTED BY Jake Revill
WRITTEN BY Jake Revill and Kayleigh Harris
PRODUCER Jake Revill
DIRECTOR OF PHOTOGRAPHY Josh Trett

Main Cast: Will Newman, Josh Trett, Jake Revill


http://www.trettfilms.tk

Category:

Film & Animation

Tags:

• paranormal
• short
• film
• jake
• revill
• josh
• trett
• will
• newman
• scary
• groundhog
• day
• creepy
• chiller
• chilling
• independent
• films
• trettfilms
• movie

[dafkins12]

the story is brilliant. some of the editing is good.try using colour correction when editing and maybe giving the movie a widescreen look just to give it more of a movie feel..o yee and get a tripod :P it's good just a couple of details to make it so much better.keep at it,you got some great ideas.

[trettfilms]

We have a tripod but as the dp I was trying out "shaky-cam" seen in things such as "24" and the Bourne films.

[dafkins12]

ahh i c,fair enough.just a suggestion.

[trettfilms]

Yeah, I probably over did it though.

[moviemakinfreak]

i'm gonna deviate from the rest of the comments here. this film is far from being great. there a quite a few things u can do to make this better. first, u gotta focus a looooot more on lighting. its really awkward at some points. ure shaky camera made it look very amateur. the shot selection and order was kind of awkward. the music i think detracted mroe than it enhanced. i'm gonna be completely blunt about this but the actors in al ure films are just way below par. there r jsut some tips.

[trettfilms]

I think you are being slightly to much of a hypocrite, especially about the actors.

[darrkfate]

Haha love the Fallout 3 Tranquility Lane music in the beggining

[speedfilmltd]

Good work!

[bradleysmith1996]

Cool little short.

[InTheLunchBox]

hey cool short guys the story was well developed which a lot of short films on youtube lack. One critique is try not to shake the camrea so much on inserts because i kinda of draws away from the reality of the movie because when the camrea moves you can here it clicking.