I love the song, however it feels as if it would make a better recorded song than just acoustic. I can just imagine really great drumming and electric guitar in certain parts of the song, like there is a lot of untapped power that can't be done in acoustic.
I do really like it, I like that it's sort of going back to your earlier roots before Truth of the World. I would change the way you sing the word "pieces", though, Jon. It's a bit grating and doesn't really sound right.
Not too fussed on the name of song or when the word pieces is sung. The rest of the lyrics are good and the music is great. Personally I would tinker with the name and that part in the lyrics somehow. In saying that is is slowly growing on me, so... maybe that means it's an album song but not a single ?? overall 6/10 on this one.
I really like this song, except for one thing. It sounds like your having a high when you sing the chorus, Jon. Just keep it natural!
jhpb2 1 month ago
ahhh this feels like the days of light surrounding you, dont change it, me likey
blipblipblur 2 months ago
Tops
nathr94 3 months ago
AWESOME !!
the67go 5 months ago
I love the song, however it feels as if it would make a better recorded song than just acoustic. I can just imagine really great drumming and electric guitar in certain parts of the song, like there is a lot of untapped power that can't be done in acoustic.
DMSofTheSea 6 months ago
Love it! It might be one of my favorites! I'm looking forward to this album!
SONTARDISAWESOME 6 months ago 2
i really like it (: its simple and catchy and quite interesting in regards to music composition (:
joobrah 6 months ago
I do really like it, I like that it's sort of going back to your earlier roots before Truth of the World. I would change the way you sing the word "pieces", though, Jon. It's a bit grating and doesn't really sound right.
SamiHikari 6 months ago
Support!
Xilosphere 6 months ago
Not too fussed on the name of song or when the word pieces is sung. The rest of the lyrics are good and the music is great. Personally I would tinker with the name and that part in the lyrics somehow. In saying that is is slowly growing on me, so... maybe that means it's an album song but not a single ?? overall 6/10 on this one.
magilling 6 months ago