i decided to re-do it without the cell phone. lol!
Lyrics:
Hook(2x):
Opinions are like voices, we all have a different kind.
Just sit back and get this in your mind.
Opinions are like voices, we all have a different kind.
Just relax and let me reach you inside.
Verse 1 (Eboyd):
As day gave way to starry night,
And the glorious pastel moon shone bright,
A color spectrum lined the sky,
Like brush strokes on a canvas. Sly
Sapphire stole into the air,
And mist created a watercolor glare.
Then came the scent of fresh, paved streets,
And dew glazed grass; a novel treat.
The wind combed the earth in soft, cool gusts
From the ocean whose waves thrust,
and crash themselves upon the shore,
as they've done before and will forever more.
Forever just and orderly,
Yet still glorious and free.
So as this gorgeous, spacious sky turned black,
Happiness filled my soul, eyelids closed, head rolled back.
(Hook)
Verse 2 (Eboyd):
As darkness began to consume the day,
And skies began to turn an ether gray,
Toxic streaks of color scarred the sky,
Without care, purpose or reason why.
The slow dying of the morning light,
Into a blur of black and white,
Further distorted by the moonlit fog.
The pungent stench that pricked the sense
Was odorous tar of streets so thick and dense.
Then came the stinging cold of wind,
Coming from over the bend,
Where waves pointlessly drown the shells,
With ever random, chaotic swell.
The useless, nonrhythmic ebb and flow.
So rushing came the crushing night;
Eyelids heavy, lashes touching, i lost my sight.
(Hook)
i reckon you should record this over a different temp beat, the lyrics can flow i just think the drums are too slow on this track to fit the rhythm of the lyrics, but if you did it over a slightly faster beat it could flow right
siwooot 1 year ago
@siwooot lol idk man, i'd probably have to rewrite it and everything too haha. idk if i'm even really feeling the concept anymore lol
eboyd32 1 year ago
Im sorry but your flow is wack son. So is your voice its very monotonous and boring. Lyrics a bit better but still average
2 stars
DeleteTheEIite 1 year ago
@DeleteTheEIite btw, Guru = dope + monotonous :D
eboyd32 1 year ago
Yeah there are many monotonous but dope mc's, especially from the west (where im guessing ur from)
check out a track called "For her Souly, Slowly, Solely" by H.I.M.N.L. i think its up on youtube, but has been misnamed with the title of his crew Darleaf insted of H.I.M.N.L.
his abstract poetry is untouchable, shame he gets such little props :(
DeleteTheEIite 1 year ago
@DeleteTheEIite thanks for the suggestion, and haha, yeah, i'm from Los Angeles. like i said though, check out "Wargods". it is WAAAAAY different and my shit isn't monotonous anymore. if you like it, i suggest you stay ready for my upcoming LP "Modus Operandi". i am releasing it under the moniker of Agent X.
eboyd32 1 year ago