Two Poles - Sanger - Slam Poem

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Uploaded by on Dec 29, 2009

This is my first slam poem. It's called "Two Poles". If you have any comments, advice, or whatever, please leave a comment.
© Copyright Sanger Smith 2009

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  • It's my first poem. I know it sucks haha.

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  • That was amazing sanger. My favorite one.

  • Good Job :)

  • @sanger8990 doesnt suck at all. it is really good. i wasn't tryin to sound like i didnt like it. i really did; i just dont think it is done

  • you got some talent, but this piece seems like you are trying too hard to be a slam poet. Your potential would increase once you move past that. Be patient with your work and get past cliche' voices and rhymes. You have a good way of seeing the world. Keep writing, and keep performing. In all things you do be original. I will give you a first draft that i performed the other night at an open mic.

  • damn man thats some good shit

  • Amazing talent, Sanger. You have an impressive command of rhythm and sound - but more importantly an impressive command of compassion. Keep writing.

  • That was dope!

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