Two Poles - Sanger - Slam Poem
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That was amazing sanger. My favorite one.
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Good Job :)
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@sanger8990 doesnt suck at all. it is really good. i wasn't tryin to sound like i didnt like it. i really did; i just dont think it is done
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you got some talent, but this piece seems like you are trying too hard to be a slam poet. Your potential would increase once you move past that. Be patient with your work and get past cliche' voices and rhymes. You have a good way of seeing the world. Keep writing, and keep performing. In all things you do be original. I will give you a first draft that i performed the other night at an open mic.
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damn man thats some good shit
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Amazing talent, Sanger. You have an impressive command of rhythm and sound - but more importantly an impressive command of compassion. Keep writing.
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That was dope!
It's my first poem. I know it sucks haha.
sanger8990 1 year ago