Uploader Comments (trettfilms)
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Nice work by all involved!
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Quite Good man!
I have notes:
When he embraces his GF the camera is too shakey.
You really need to work on your audio transitions. Like the sad music just stopped then cut to bond-esque music, you need to fade them in. If you have final cut use the audio transitions. try to get final cut, I'm sure someone on bfff and give it to you.
Use a boom mic, but I think you did, don't rely on the built in mic.
You crossed the line (180° rule) when the guy said "...chance to get your revenge"
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This film is soo good, it makes me want to slaugher orphans =D
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Nice work Josh. DOPE opening credits too.
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when it all got stretched i was thrown but it fixes itself soon enough.
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yes looking great so far! loved when christie was shot (of course, not BECAUSE she was shot) just that it was very well filmed, emotionally. look forward to the rest!
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...Epic.
:D
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"Come with me Max" Guy (Tomas) has very distracting eyes... But still good acting :D
who's the girl at the start?
btw im gonna watch all of these :)
laughatyou1 1 year ago
@laughatyou1 Kayleigh-Jake's girlfriend.
trettfilms 1 year ago