Spider Cypher 3 verses by me

HappyBunny:
http://www.youtube.com/user/HappyBunny001

Bleach:
http://www.youtube.com/user/RingerINC

yeah i'm not the best, but i'm working and thought this would be good just to test my ish w/e hope you guys enjoy it..appreciate feedback, i know my articulation is weak though.

Lyrics:

Verse 1:
Feeling the beat, spitting the heat, Im elite/
Your listening, and you know you cant compete Im to complete/
Im climbing up the mountain to reach the top of the peak/
I choose to never slack, I will beat you with my stunning speech/
Next week if you come back Im gonna bash you till you sleep/
Slash you in the spine, Im sublime and your bleak/
All of these emcees are sheep, so I lash em till they herd(heard)/
If they dont get it at first listen again, listen and learn/
Being skilled and artful, I still work hard to heighten concern/
Dissin to burn, Im spittin masterful words, wait your turn/
Your spastic with your flow, even though you dont know/
I keep it uniform like private school folk, this aint faux/
Its true, just like the sky is blue, now you try to chew/
But my words dont go down easy like Buckleys on a spoon/
Ill call you crazy cause, Im screwing you up like a pile driver/
You cant reach me, the reason? Because Im a mile higher/

Verse 2:
Half way up the hill, persevere until I reach the top/
Wont flop like bellies in the pool, Im cooking haters in a pot/
Looking down, booking them for the dull tracks they wrote/
Im macro on the mic, they blow and Im spectacular, take note/
They below me, look at the height of my feets(feats), they will discover/
Ill make them recede, cause they frontin like no other/
Im stopping them in their tracks, these bitches lack the passion/
Hip-hop aint about fashion, In PJs look at all these kids Im smashin/
They like little ants, those fags are brittle, as they prance like gays/
Today is no different than any other one so stay/
Watch me as Im defiling, violent with the words I say/
Defacing holy ornaments, sacrilegious with my praise (preys)/
Eat up everything, win tournaments like Roger Federer/
The developer, photos of destruction, its a red alert/
Im down with champions of the world, victory inevitable/
Drown you with a flood of words, this is me, incredible/

Verse 3:
I strip masters of titles, to insure Im not grotesque/
Not the best but, despite this Im on my way to the crest/
Of the mountain, ultimate test, video game with cheat code/
Like I got unlimited lives, I will not retreat or fold/
This dont bode well for others, they positively pretend/
With my pen I stress good values, when I change the present men/
Eleven, ten, thats the direction, my opponents going, down/
With proper mentality I swear Im slewing clowns/
In reality I will rule, totalitarian describes my tools/
Barbarian like, I wield arbitral weaponry in a duel/
Bringing judgment controversially like the King-Byng Thing/
Respond courteously if you dont, then expect the death swing/
At the top of the mountain, Ive met my goal, I am king/
Trample upon souls, reached ascension like Im lord of the ring/
This aint treason, Im just greater than the last monarchs legion/
Now I rule this region, no debate, like an exilarch Im leadin/

Started at the bottom, I reached the epitome/
Legitimately, I am the king over this land and sea/
No beatin me Im not appearing weak, Im a monolith/
Im high on top, so the world seems bottomless/


Lyrics coming soon

Category:

Music

Tags:

• spider
• cypher
• crappy
• rap

[williamwcook]

good lyrics, the delivery could use some work.

over all i give you props.

[firefromhell27]

thanks man.

[historicrecord]

What's an exilarch ?

[firefromhell27]

a line of heritage...descendents become jewish leaders or something, wikipedia it.

[Leusifer]

The lyrics seem to flow nicely; I think if you'd gotten more familiar with them your vocal flow could have been better (you said you didn't bother to memorize it). As it stands, I think it was still pretty good, especially for you only having been rapping for a month. Keep it up; you'll get more accustomed. :)

[firefromhell27]

thanks bro.

[IEatHarlots]

LOL

[MrGOLDENSTATE510]

it was written like nas said

[soldier7280]

MOLE!!!!

[187RUKKUS]

real good lyrics but yeah like will said delivry could use some work . try not to have ur voice so monotone in places . not hatin at all though good work keep it up . i spit 2 verses on this cyper myself .

[amityshrill]

nice, im postin my spider cyber like right now lol

[LilHomie52]

Pretty good man.

[illfromthe215]

damn thats realy good for only spittin for not spitting for too long. i have only been spittin for like three. check my spider cyhper

[wesmantooth45]

chop it up and make guacamole!!!