Help me write a summer anthem!

I've written a couple of verses and a catchy chorus for a great summer song called Sunshine Beauty, and I want your help to finish it.

Check out the lyrics on my blog here:

http://www.ihatemornings.com/2009/01/06/help-me-write-a-summer-anthem/

Leave a comment with your ideas for verse 3 and the bridge, or message me on Twitter! http://twitter.com/ihatemornings

Let's see if we can write a summer blockbuster for 2009...

Category:

Music

Tags:

• Sunshine
• Beauty
• demo

[sparkldog]

How about this...

Through all of the things I'm suppose to accomplish... I want this now... come on here... we're just looking for someone who won't look like in front of my so you could be my sunshine right in my eyes!

That's only some of it.

[Domovoi444]

And when you see me through the croud your face lights up you look so proud at me I look around excited it seems that you look ... at me

Through a croud ... so big ... Couldnt think after that...

[ihavevideostoo]

ok i thought a little bit... i dont know lyrics for the whole 3rd verse but i thought for the first part for it.

okay here goes,

"i always see your eyes sparkle right by the beach, they sparkle every time when i see your face and i......

yeah i dont know if you like it.....

thats the best i could do for the 1st part of the third verse!

[ihavevideostoo]

i thought a little but not for the whole 3rd verse. the first part of the third verse could be..

"i see your eyes sparkle right by the beach, i always see them sparkle every time i see your face."

[ihavevideostoo]

you mean lyrics right? yeah ummmmm i'll thnk

[Zarke3]

I've read the lyrics, and I'm trying to think of another verse for you. Nothing's coming to me though. If I think of something, I'll let you know. Great song though.

[oPuPo]

Loving it :) ... will have a think and get back to you lol