I Attempt From Love's Sickness to Fly Bartione Solo
Uploader Comments (AkiraKinyota)
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nasal
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ehhhhhhh..... :/
All Comments (24)
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Not great.
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Don't sing the melismae on this song so forcefully - just let the notes flow freely. Also, work on your breathing - I can hear you trying to breathe outside the directed marks... Make sure you are filling up in your diaphragm and depleting all of the air before each phrase.
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fond heart with pride shall no more swell? . . .
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don't strain you throat by putting a "H" sound in front of your vowels. like when you sing the trill for the word "fly" you put an H in front of the each word. force your sound and breath to come from as low in your stomach as possible. not from you throat or chest. but sounds good man :)
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don't strain you throat by putting a "H" sound in front of your vowels. like when you sing the trill for the word "fly" you put an H in front of the each word. force your sound and breath to come from as low in your stomach as possible. not from you throat or chest. but sounds good man :)
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I'm working on singing this right now for contest! I think you did a pretty good job. I'm no expert so I can't exactly comment on what to improve but the I hink nottus6017 has givin some lovely advice! :)
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Excuse me but that is extremely rude! If you don't like it, than why not give a reason why and a few tips if you think you could do better!
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Good attempt at a tough song to sing .
I enjoyed your singing .
Thank you.
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Um...... Ew.....
Bass 1 against me for VA honors choir this fall? hopefully i'll see you there!
some tips:
-try to show the text while keeping the vocal line smooth, esp on the "fly" run.
-keep that ah vowel a little brighter than you have it now, it should be tall without sounding forced.
-avoid closing to the consonant too early, there are a few places in this video where it sounds choppy (every "sick" you're turning into an eighth note, for example).
-overall, dont sacrifice good singing for baroque styling
xntricjay 3 years ago
Aaah~ You won't see me there because I cannot try out! I'm only a rising highschool junior. I did this because I was bored and I was trying to get the song out of my head after hearing it a bajillion times this past year.
Great comments though! I'll really take these to heart and try them out to try and improve myself so I really thank you for that.
AkiraKinyota 3 years ago