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My last episode only got like 16 comments. I usually get like over 100. If i don't get a lot of comments on this and ratings and more subscribers there is no point for me to write more episodes!
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The Next Day After School:
Joe- *sees Jen walking from class and follows her holding a blindfold. When she gets to an area where there arent many people, he grabs her from behind and ties it over her eyes even though she knows its him* Come with me quietly. I promise youll like this. Seriously.
Jen- What the fuckk are you doing to me Joe? *struggles* Nick wouldnt be very happy with you right now!
Joe- *laughs* Ill let you think that if you want. *takes her to his car and puts her in. he listens to her screaming and starts to get turned on as he drives in silence*
Jen- Why are you doing this to me? I thought you and Nick agreed that after you raped me, I was only his!
Joe- Well plans can be changed sweetie. *gets to the place where Nick told him to meet, but keeps driving. He is turned on and he had a hot girl in his car. Not even his little brother could interfere with this. Anyways it was his own fault for trusting him alone with a girl. Drives a little farther to a vacant parking lot and stops the car*
Jen- Where are we?
Joe- That doesnt matter babe. *climbs into the back seat and gets on top of her starting to pull her shirt off*
Jen- *struggles more and starts to remove her blindfold* Get off of me!!
Joe- *puts her blindfold back on* There wont be any need for that babe. *holds her down as he finishes taking her shirt off and starts to kiss and bite her neck. Then moves down to remove her bra with one skillful gesture and sucks on her erect nipples as he undoes her jeans and slides them slowly down*
Jen- STOP! *reaches for her phone on the seat and without Joe noticing, manages to somehow text Nick: H.E.L.P.*
Joe- Come on Jen. This is fun right? *puts his arms around her back and pulls her towards him as he kisses and licks down her stomach to her soaking wet panties and starts to flick his tongue against her hard clit underneath the thin material then pulls them completely off with his teeth and starts to savagely eat her out*
Back With Nick:
Nick- *is pacing back and forth along the pier holding a bouquet of roses waiting for Joe to arrive with Jen when he receives a text from her saying H.E.L.P* Oh Shittt! *right away he assumes the worst and realizes what is probably going on. He jumps in his car and starts to drive looking everywhere hoping Joe hasnt gotten too far yet. He keeps driving and finally he sees a parking lot with one car. Upon closer examination, there seemed to be 2 people in the backseat: a boy and a girl*
Joe- *is just finishing eating Jen out and starts to unbutton his pants to take his huge dick out and starts to put it in her mouth as she screams. Then he sees another car approaching and someone get out of the car and run towards them* OH shitt thats Nick!!
Jen- YES! *removes her blindfold and sees him outside the car. shed never been this happy to see Nick before*
Nick- *bangs on the window* Joe, I dont know why I ever trusted you with this task. Leave Jen with me and leave NOW!
Joe- *sulks* Fine. *Opens the door and pushes Jen out then drives off*
Jen- *runs to Nick and hugs him tightly* Thank you so much!
Nick- *hugs her back* Im so sorry he did that to you. I did tell him to get you and take you somewhere but I didnt know he would do this to you. I shouldve knownWell I have to take you somewhere. Take a ride with me?
Poll:
When/If Nick asks Jen out, what should she say?
A. Yes!!
B. She'll think about it
C. NO!
D. He shouldn't even ask her out! (then what should he do?)
I'd say D, but thtat doesnt look like a popular pick
bunchapeeps 2 years ago
what do you suggest he do instead?
BadBoyJonasWriter 2 years ago
I thought you said it wouldn't be a love story.. or even get all lovey dovey, so he shouldn't even ask her out 9: See, I remeber your story, because I'm a good fan (:
hoopz10195 2 years ago
haha yah. i did say that. and by all means it will continue to be extremely graphic don't worry about that! :). however, i have received so many messages and comments etc from ALOT of my readers saying i should turn Nick into not AS mean as before as long as i continued to make the sex scenes graphic. I am considering this, but even if it does happen he will still go back to his old ways at times and i refuse to ever make joe nice! :) haha so we'll see. you'll have to read 2 find out b/c idk yet
BadBoyJonasWriter 2 years ago
did she get out of the car naked?? O.o
lol love it! more!!
MileyCyrusFan1012 2 years ago
haha i love how my readers pick up on these things! when i was writing i honestly didn't think about that. i might work that into my next episode tho if i remember. :)
BadBoyJonasWriter 2 years ago