The Death of Giants - www.whisperingword.com
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this was so horrible specially the sound effects and the children's pictures but it is true
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Come Back WTC !! =(
Greetings from Brazil !!
I'm Sorry
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The screams were very inopropiot asshole
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Oh God...another HOMO trying to make memorial video to the towers. YOU SUCK QUEER!!!
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@vrfarrell As a connoisseur of poetry and prose I would suggest that you quit the craft and turn your hand to another form of art if you desperately need an outlet so badly
Ps a word to the wise remove this for although we can’t see you it is cringingly neck tingling awful
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the ending was horrible, but good poetry
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The poem is actually not a bad piece of work.. but you need to hear it as you hear all poems, without visuals. They are terrible
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@vrfarrell Fuck You !! You're a religious piece of shit !! who in the hell would follow a FAGGOT like you ? Fuck You, Fuck your whispering piece of word Shit, your country is filled with nothing but a bunch of whining wanker FAGGOTS. Do the world a favor and especially your country a favor, and be an inspiration to them and kill yourself. maybe they'll follow that.
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quite a shit poem. quite a shit video. what the fuck was with the unnecessary video editting, you fuck. poetry my ass.
Thank you for your observations and recommendations Rick. It's good to see that you have a firm grasp on both language and emotion. I see you like the letter F. I wonder, have you ever considered becoming a preacher? I think your use of alliteration could be a real boon 2 u. Have a great day!
vrfarrell 10 months ago
you fuckin knob head taking the piss out of this ... 'like a peeling bananaa'?? wtf your mentaly disturbed. and the sound effects!!! get a life you skum!
Tobiere09 1 year ago
@Tobiere09 @Tobiere09 I take it you are not a poetry fan then mate? I take your opening expletives as comments on how this poem effected you. As to the rest, well, admittedly my mental state is questionable, however, as skum lies on top of water, I would have deny any comparison there, I am more of a bottom feeder, so sludge or slurry would be more apt a description.Just to calrify once again, that I am not 'taking the piss'.
vrfarrell 1 year ago
Words by themsleves cannot describe the horror of what happened or of what has happend subsequently. Sorry you didn't like my imagaery. May I suggest a more fitting comment might have been:-"You Richard Cranium you! Your reference to fruit was I feel most inappropriate and failed to convey the import of the horror. I suspect both your mental aptitude and stability, you sudgey, slurry thing you."I hope this helps.
vrfarrell 1 year ago