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Seduction Leads to Destruction; Chapter 4

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Uploaded by on Feb 16, 2010

Heeeey guys. Well, sorry I haven't posted in like 8 years. I had actually planned on posting last week, then my computer got a virus and it was all effed up. Plus I lost motivation. so here's chapter 4..


& OH. It completely sucks. Just to let you know. I'm having major writers block; but I knew it was unfair
to keep you guys waiting any longer.
Comment? I don't care what you say. You can tell me it sucks, for all I care. Because hell, it does. ;D

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Ivy ran her hand against the cool beige leather as Nick climbed in the car. She slightly looked at him, who was hesitant in putting the keys in the ignition. The heavy silence hung around them thick and dense, like you could cut it with a knife. It was more than Ivy was used too, and she was started to get accustomed to it, until Nick broke the silence.

"Are you hungry?" He said, looking at her with a smirk. Ivy burst out laughing, the look on his face, and the look in his eyes pleaded with her to say yes, because he wanted and needed food.

"Ha, Sure Nicholas," Ivy giggled, playing with one of her loose acrylics. Nick nodded, and laughed to himself, while turning the keys in the ignition.

"So Ivy, tell me about yourself," Nick said as he pulled out of the school parking lot.
"Haven't you already heard about me? "She answered.
"Well, no I mean, yeah, but.." Nick stammered on, not quite sure how to answer. Truth was, Nick had heard all about her, everything from her mom, to who she did last night. He knew she wasn't the type of girl to hang around with, but he didn't care. He could tell that the way she acted around other people, was not her.

"Exactly. So, you've heard stuff about me."
"Well, aren't you gonna tell me the truth?"
"About what?"
"You." Nick kept driving, until he pulled into a little shopping mall, where Ivy could see a Panera in the far right. He slowly took the keys out of the ignition, rubbing his head, this girl gave him a headache. Ivy sucked in a breath, deciding whatever she said next could either make or break this relationship.

"Nicholas, whatever you've heard about me, its probably true," And with that she got out of the car, leaving Nick breathless behind her.




Very short, and very suckish.
Peaceee.
& oh, i own nothingg. mmk.

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  • ii lovee youu(: whoo doo ii soundd likee?:p

  • carlyyy mccnassttnasstyywhoreee ;*

    my mom called me downstairs, and she was like, 'show me who this girl iss.' so i did, and

    she was like, 'SHE'S NOT ATTRACTIVE!' it kind of made my day.

  • j'adore(: you forgot quotation marks, I do believe.

    IT DID NOT SUCK, by the way.:)

  • @Natalata3782 Oh mann. Effing youtube did that. /:

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  • loved it!

  • girl, this has got me wanting to start writing again :D

  • it didn't suck, it was really good :)

  • beautiful! (:

  • i loved it rachel, i dont understand

    how you can think your writing sucks!

    its beautiful!

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