Air Traffic Control (Original)

Song I wrote almost a year ago, been trying to polish it up. Imagery consists of airplane and air traffic control towers, mainly gotten from online sources such as Wikimedia Commons and Morgue File. Lyrics:

Air Traffic Control

You fail so sweetly
You say it's done
You wanted more than
Just this one

All the work you have done
All the towels your head has wet
All the Boeings grounded
Your nomad eye is not content

Outside is in you
Inside is out
Halo's smile of wonder
Slowly is forgot

All the work you have done
All the towels your head has wet
All the Boeings grounded
Your nomad eye is not content

Category:

Music

Tags:

• air
• traffic
• control
• original
• song
• airplanes
• towers
• folk
• country
• rock
• acoustic
• guitar

[villagersofoblivion]

hey man.,,the gorilla said i should check you out and he was right...this is good...i dig your style...very cool!

[PavonineDream]

thanks bro.  yeah, i've come across more good music by his recommendation lately than just about anything -- he recommended your channel to me as well.

[experimentalrock]

Nice one. Very English sounding to me. Beatles/Beck as previously stated. Well done brother.

[PavonineDream]

thanks, man - pleased you liked the song. yeah, people have said several of these songs have an old world flavor to them.

[BacksideGorilla]

love this. agree with other posters, reminds me of beck. i am usually a fan of short songs on youtube, but could have used more of this one. the sound effects at about :56 sound a little out of place, but by no means effect the quality of this tune.

[PavonineDream]

thanks for the feedback on this song - i wondered about removing the turntable sound effects before, and if i ever get around to editing and reposting this song i probably will remove them

[Fralland]

the suck

[ThePatheticClub]

@villagersofoblivion

I've got this as well as the other two you sent me on my mp3 player. I listen to this at work sometimes. :)

[ballerinakay]

woo i like this song. its brillent!!!!!!

LOVE THIS SONG!

man i wish i could write songs. they always turn out crap...

Good on you!

[Harrysjm]

wow man great song. i want to see this in a movie soundtrack.

[ThePatheticClub]

So brilliant!

[ThePatheticClub]

Excellent song! Got me to subscribe!