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The FanFiction Critic, episode 34, "MoonbeamDancer's Story"

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Uploaded by on Mar 20, 2011

The fanfiction in today's episode belongs entirely to the author. It can be read in its entirety here: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/267190/1/MoonbeamDancers_Story. Suggest bad fanfiction: thefanfictioncritic@gmail.com

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  • The author pretty much lifted Nephlite's entire death scene from his death in Sailor Moon. He gets stabbed through the chest saving the girl who's in love with him. The girl tries to pull out the thing in said chest. They say their 'I love you's' and Nephlite turns into dust because that's how all the bad guys die in that show.

  • @Sakuraleaf2007

    OMG, you're right! I can't believe I didn't notice that when I was reading this...

  • i actually like the musical cats its not that bad

  • @TheTop20freak

    Oh, don't get me wrong - "Cats" is one of my favorite musicals. But I will admit that I am utterly confused by it. I like it mostly for sentimental reasons, and I enjoy the soundtrack as well.

  • If Macavity lives under my bed... He got crushed.. My bed sits on a Boxspring on the floor. SO SAD TOO BAD. /brickd'

  • @wolvesandtea

    In your case, he might be living in the closet then.

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  • Also, am I the only one who thinks some of the people in the play look like the Thundercats?

  • Hmm. . . I need another drink. I don't know how you go through all these, honestly. You have a will of steel if you can not only review these yet also go through and correct them as well as film your reactions and be humorous with an air of professionalisim tossed in on top of it all. Kudos to you!

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  • I once had a cat named Freckles since she was black with brown spots.

  • @AFanFictionCritic Oh I think I forgot to feed Macativity. I havn't feed him in three years!

  • After hearing the words "Magic" and "Nephlite" I instantly thought this author is making a bad crossover between Winx, Sailor Moon and Cats.

  • the people who acted in 'cats' must have lost a lot of dignity doing the shows.

  • MoonbeemDancer... that name gives me bad flashbacks of "Starkit's prophecy"

  • Ugh, Cats is one of my favorite things to geek out over. I seriously love it, and this fanfiction just hurts all the more because of that. Thanks for ripping it apart for us.

  • :/ I like of liked that movie though...

  • I know it's a few months old, but I had to comment.

    This made me go and watch Cats, and I realised something. The Victoria in the story matches up with one cat in the show called the same thing (same description in the fic) and "Misto" who is good at magic is spelt the same way you'd shorten... Mr. Mistoffelees.

    Struck me as strange. Did she... combine things? Steal names? Whatever. That'd just make it worse.

    (Also, I think Jenny is Jennyanydots and Jelly is Jellylorum.)

  • This is the BEST video I've watched! Way for the author to mess up canon and mix Cats with Sailor Moon. 2 of my Favorite Things!

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