Hello! [LYRICS IN DESCRIPTION]
I sung and wrote the lyrics =)
I hope you guys enjoy this! Also, there were no special effects =D
I also had to remix the piano version of the song because originally it was only..A minute and 30 seconds long or something like that. But anyways, I hope it sounds okay =)
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You Are Me - Yui Hisaishi
You and I are just alike
Our voices sound the same
We both have the hearts that beat like a star
One in all we are
I was lost in a dark world
But yet, you lifted me up
All alone I was and then you came
To help me up onto my feet
Look at who we both are
We both came from a hell
Yet, you were the one with the smile
And I the one alone with the frowns
You and I are just the same
Together we walk locked hands
We both care for what no one cannot see
Forever we are one
You were not noticed by anyone here
No one seemed to see or care
All alone you were in this dark world
But yet, you walk on your feet
I can see who you are
Someone that's suffering
You lie to yourself and the world
Just to not show that, you're at pain!
You are not going to be
All alone in this dark world
I will stand by you with my hand held out
Just for you to take
You and I are just alike
Our voices sound the same
We both have the hearts that beat like a star
One in all we are
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Let me know what you guys think! Also, remember to subscribe, comment and rate =D
Critiques are welcomed =)
-Yui
Do you mind putting up a link to the backing track?
SakuraDaidoji 6 months ago
@SakuraDaidoji
The backing track, as in the instrumental?
YuiHisaishi 3 months ago
@YuiHisaishi Yes...
SakuraDaidoji 3 months ago
@SakuraDaidoji
Message me your email, if I can find it I'll send it to you.
YuiHisaishi 3 months ago
You have a beautiful voice :) The mood and melody fits perfectly with the composition of your voice.. However, the wording needs to be improved.. Some of the sentences don't match with the melody, so you needed to "slide" some of the words. Also, try to rhyme the words to all the more enhance the quality of the song. Anyway, I love the topic you picked out. Keep working on it and you'll get there! :))
sasigrl4evr 7 months ago
@sasigrl4evr
Whoa, thanks for the critique =D
I know I have problems writing lyrics, but when I get technical about it I can't write anything. This song was just pure expression. I keep trying though, thanks for your time =)
YuiHisaishi 7 months ago