Toms River-ScalaSwag

This is my second song, it called Toms River(Rack City remix) let me know what you guys think. i fixed the problem where the music was to loud but maybe its to low in this one. Anyway yeah thats my second song everyone

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• rap
• Rapping
• scala
• music
• Freestyle
• Hiphop
• Freestyle Music
• Hip Hop
• Rapper

[niggerbeater6969]

u suck at rapping u white faggot

[Ashwin11LB]

you suck. btw who the fuck wears dc hats anymore?

[pookiestockie]

nice job man you really captured the essence of how lovely living in toms river is

[bmillet16]

yo, i work at zukas on fischer, can you come meet me so we can talk about you doin a show at the place for some kind of event. and im being serious we do commercials on youtube and we want you to rap in em MESSAGE ME tonight if ya can

[ShurProd]

@ShurProd also try to avoid the nikki minaj style rap "tenSHON, penSHON, extenSHON" - dont do that

[ShurProd]

hey good start, keep workin on the lyrics (coming from a writer probably unlike these other comments) you will always get hate - thats inevitable , but it takes heart and balls to go out of your way to make a song and video to upload for the world to see - and always remember that making music is fun, its personal, and no one can judge you on the fact that you do it for fun - so fuck haters and do what you do.

[AntiNoobTactics]

I used to live in listen to this....until I took an arrow to the knee

[jkeogh28]

So good keep it up

[mikeyeager11]

@edgcill kid obvi never listened to rack cityy before. Its not that bad, alot better than the first rap. the chorus is freshhhhh.

[edgcill]

youre garbage as hell. youve always been a faggot and that wont ever change im not trying to say shit behind a computer screen but i will say it to your face if i run across you. youre horrible at rapping, just give it up. you would be better if you werent so repetitive and redundant. keep practicing and you may get better, but, for now, youre pretty bad.