Ultimate Tenkaichi Fanfic: Return of the Dragons ep2- First Steps

Here is episode 2 of my original fanfic! Here's the synopsis:

Exactly 3 years have passed since Shonuff and Kuro defeated Drakon and banished the dragons back to their realm. His son, Junior is 12 years old now and is old enough to compete with the adults in the World Martial Arts Tournament. He's determined to win the Championship for his father. Meanwhile there is another youthful fighter entering the competition for similar reasons. As the two fighters train, there is a evil warrior in search of Kuro's son. Who could this mysterious man be? And what does he want with Kuro's son?

Special shoutouts to DragonballShinnin and AkillesTheHedgehog for the idea.

Let me know how you guys like it.

Category:

Gaming

Tags:

• Ultimate
• Tenkaichi
• Fanfic:
• Return
• of
• the
• Dragons
• ep2-
• First
• Steps

[ultimateguitarist13]

what kind of recording software do you use?

[Skiptmlu]

@ultimateguitarist13 I use a Hauppauge HD PVR.

[Skiptmlu]

@ultimateguitarist13 I use a Hauppauge HD PVR.

[ultimateguitarist13]

@Skiptmlu also, what's your PSN username?

[Skiptmlu]

@ultimateguitarist13 SSJSKIP2MYLU

[Baracuss1]

I'm really seeing some great stuff! But there's still the matter of the text wizzing past too fast too read at certain points. I understand its because you want to keep with the pace of some of the clips, but you could slow the clips down a bit. I laughed my ass off at Aunt Aika, and can't wait to see what's going to happen between Junior and Honda/Gohan. I also like how creative you've gotten with mixing in clips from different games, and the boss battles as well. Looking forward to more soon!

[Skiptmlu]

@Baracuss1 Thanks man! I'm still working on the text problem. But thanks for the criticism.

[DBEproductions]

As someone who has been around a long time, I approve of this and i can't wait to see more from you.

[Skiptmlu]

@TaylorCashkidd Thanks man. Yeah its hard trying to come up with a good story lol. Thats why its taking so long. But thats why I use different shows and fanfics for reference.

[OurHouseForSaleRep]

It's on like Donkey Kong; Bring it Grape Ape?

You just got subscribed; them were real funny lines. Then again I already subbed. Lolz.

[EternalDahaka]

Nice job. Shame you couldn't hide the hud during the great ape fight though.

[Baracuss1]

@Skiptmlu No problem bro! :D

[Skiptmlu]

@Baracuss1 Thanks man! I'm still working on the text problem. But thanks for the criticism.