You and I - original song

I have about half a dozen multi-track ventures going, but then I wake up with this one playing in my head and can't do anything else until it is freed.

This song is about one lover explaining to another why it's best if they part company.

Thanks for listening/commenting/rating/sharing. It is an honor to get input from so many knowledgable artists.

Lyrics
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Lessons I've learned
Pages turned
Bridges burned are the
Lessons I've learned

Roads travelled on
Can be so long
Not always strong on
The roads you're on

Seasons change
Though desires remain
Isn't it strange how
Seasons still change

Devil you know
Can be so better than
Devil you don't

You and I
We're not meant
For each other anyway
You and I
These aches will fade

Kisses goodbye
There's nothing I
Despise more
Than kisses goodbye

If we could make it
I would take it
But I can't fake it

You and I
We're not meant
For each other anyway
You and I
These aches will fade

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• Beatles
• acoustic
• guitar
• singer
• songwriter
• original
• song
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• Osowiecki

[dnarbbrand]

Really nice song - i have listened to it a few times and although chorus and verses are good not sure if they belong together in the same song

hope you get what i mean

all the best

[Oswlek]

How do you mean? Lyrics? Chords? Melody? Can you elaborate on it a bit?

Thanks for the comment.

[dnarbbrand]

I mean the verse as a verse is great and the chorus is great but not sure whether they fit in the same song - they dont seem to go togther because I don't think they compliment each other

hope you get what i mean

[Oswlek]

OK, so it is lyrically that you feel they don't mesh, right?

[dnarbbrand]

actually it is melody that i dont feel mesh but thats just my opinion

[Oswlek]

Alright, thanks for the input.

[Oswlek]

Thank you very much.

[Oswlek]

Thanks for listening and complimenting, Dave.

[Oswlek]

I'm not familiar with the song. Would you mind sending me a note with the name?

Thanks for commenting.

[Oswlek]

Thank you very much Tiffany!