An alliterative love story, from A-Z

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Uploaded by on Jan 27, 2011

This is an original poem by me, Jacob.
Words as follows:
An afternoon and arthritic Beryl bustles brightly, bringing biscuits,coffee, crossword.
Chattering carrying clattering cups.
Crash!
"Crumbs, clumsy"
Dropped drinks damply damaging the delicate exposed elderly epidermis of her firm friend.
Fanciful foolish feelings, fully forbidden flow forward gushing unguarded as Gladys gaily grabs handfuls of hot wet hem.
Her hand hovering over hidden intimacies.
Indecent, improper imaginings immediately immaterial as juddering j-cloth dries gently just under dress.
Just drying?
Dress dropped.

Geriatric kiss.

Lifelong love 'luminating, lifeless lust livens.
Lips moisten
Movement murmering, monumental. Making no noise, no need.
New octogenarian opportunities opening, oppressive otherness passed.
Parts previously pert presently plunge.
Pleasantly pressing, pecking, petting, quietly, quickly, quintissentially quaint, roaming, rolling, roving, reaching 'round areas readily rotund.
Realising.
Suddenly.

Stop.

Shakily smoothing silken skirts, silent sorries as sensual sapphic stroking ceases.

Trying to talk takes terrible time.

Unbuttoned after unrealised, unbidden, unrestrained urges- uttering ubiquitous vagueness is virtually worthless.
Wary women wondering what wicked warmth would wander...
Waiting.
Wishing.
Worries wane when:
"Wow, what wonderful-"
"Experience?!" Exclaimed exuberantly.
"Excellent"
"Exquisite"
"Exhausting!"
"You? You're?"

"Yes"

Youthful yeses zealous as zips unzipped.

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  • You expressed that really well, I loved your face as you felt every one of those words. Very impressed :)

    I've been watching your blog recently because my girlfriend's currently thinking through possibilities of FTM, and it's really nice to learn so much from your videos and from an english perspective (mainly because of the NHS differences!)

    So anyway, thanks!

  • @Amius364364 I'm really happy to answer any questions you or your gf may have, please feel free to send me a message on here and I'll give you my email/facebook :)

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  • best voice and poem i have ever listened to so far!!!! it's alot like listening to one of those audio tapes of a child or teens book 1000x thumbs up!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

  • the poem is good, really good/ thank you.

    and i have to say your voice is amazing.

  • love the alliteration!

  • Gah I wrote something here but it wouldn't send. Try two. I generally find poems orally presented quite difficult to follow, but I don't know whether it was the way you presented it or the alliterated nature of the poem that meant I could get most of the poem, except for when you were speaking very fast.

  • Loved it J. Verge of tears.

  • This is really cool!

  • The 'X's' were my favourite :)

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