This is my new song called black wall.
It is very personal. The few people i played it too, liked it so i decided to share it with you.
It is written, played and sung by me , the paining is also mine.
Lyrics
Emptyness has taken place,
iam looking in my desperate face.
my eyes so empty , my skin so white,
i dont know how to keep my light.
Chorus:
Theres a black heart, lost in the dark,
White heart in black clouds ,
my silent death spirit - shouts
the clouds are black they took all of my sight,
please remember me what is right what is wrong
i dont remember.
I am sunken in the sea of black
where darkness is all around.
Thou you are screaming to hold me back, ia m to deep in to hear you shout.
My love mistaken it is a mess
love fades to nothing give me a bless
once i was a butterfly flying high into the blue blue sky
you have been the tears that i cried
Chorus:
Theres a black heart, lost in the dark.
White heart in black clouds
My silent death spirit -shouts
I want to feel the warming light
giving me bright sight
let me fly there in the sky
made me feel totally high.
I hope you like it
Very original.
katethegreat19 1 year ago
@katethegreat19
Thank you :) I really enjoy your music ^^
XXXxxxLillith 1 year ago
Sounded really great, its nice to know that you are working on originals. Keep it up!
THUMBS UP!!!
delaneyelise 1 year ago
@delaneyelise
Thank you very much, i am very happy that you like it. I am working on a lot of originals at the moment and hope to load up some new songs soon ^^
Thanks :)
XXXxxxLillith 1 year ago
Wow!! It's fantastic, Lillith!!
You improved so much in singing!!
And did you play it too?! That's amazing played too!!
The lyrics are very strong, touching!!
Great job, you're a great songwriter!!
My compliments,
Kisses from Raffa =)
rpbraziliansinger 1 year ago
@rpbraziliansinger
Hi Raffa,
I am happy to know that you think its fantastic :D and that you realized that i worked on my voice. Yeah lets rock ! ^^
Yes i played it, i have an electric guitar (ibanez) its so much fun ^^
I have written the chords and song with it.
And a big thank you for saying i d be a great song writer ! :)
Let me know when you got something new as well!
hug
-Lillith
XXXxxxLillith 1 year ago