A Plea (original song)

written maybe a year or so ago. I unfortunately had a friend end his own life, so this is where that stemmed from.

Lyrics:
how can you believe
these things she's said?
it's easier to see
the lies she's bred
please, don't play the fool
and fall her way
last night I knew
today was the day

that I would see you cry
I tried to save your life
but these words mean little
when you won't listen
to the world that's passing by

tomorrow might come
but it's not today
your eyes go numb
you can' see her face
this is the way
it's gotta be
there has to be a way
for you to see

I can't see you die
I have to save your life
but my hands can't reach
you down at my feet
please, baby
don't you cry

I won't see you die
I've gotta save your life
but these words mean little
when you won't listen
to the one who's by your side
these words mean nothing
I can't keep loving
someone who always
hides

how can you believe
that this is the end?
why can't you just see
that I was your friend?

Category:

Music

Tags:

• tajmahollie
• plea
• original
• song
• acoustic
• guitar
• female
• vocals

[Balboa515]

Good job Hol... I like this one... your eyes alone convey a lot- Thanks for writing. I'll reply in the future.

xo,

me

[tajmahollie]

Thanks a lot, Vince. This song means a lot to me. I'm glad you liked it. :)

[JuancarlosPiura]

I love this song...the chords in the beginning sound so disonante,,

[bpaeffjay]

Very nice, it has a great hook to it.

[Oswlek]

Teach to to hit "post" before the end of the song...

I love the way that this song ended.  It is both abrupt and yet open. Going back to the verse chords and ending on a transition chord were perfect touches.

[Oswlek]

Very nice. Shades of Anna Nalick.

[different714]

ohmigosh

that was amazing

your voice and the lyrics <3

[shawnmcnair1]

Awesome voice song!!!!!

[itsgalf]

this is actually quite catchy. I like the lyrics