Wrote it in about 15min, did not use any instruments to help write, used pen and paper. just wanted to get some feedback and opinions. Original rough draft, has not been corrected yet or expanded.
i think u should really change ur melody around, it very smooth and flowly, but with the same pacing playing over and over again, it gets a bit boring, other then that, GOOD JOB! u have so much talent.
For a 15-minutes work, this is pretty impressive. Reminds me of something monotonously riding down an alley of stories.
RBM
RatBloodMusic 1 year ago
i think u should really change ur melody around, it very smooth and flowly, but with the same pacing playing over and over again, it gets a bit boring, other then that, GOOD JOB! u have so much talent.
Navanahulala 2 years ago
omg you are so talented!!!
tvbifreak 2 years ago
A bit too generic for my taste.
matthew1722 2 years ago
What would you call it?
mxthegreat 2 years ago
Well done!
The melodie flows - thats good!
I think you could use more differences in
dynamics.
Kastanienzweig 2 years ago
i love it :)
minid0rkz 2 years ago
this song is very nice ^__^
GravityCrashes 2 years ago
this is nice i really like it! ^^
beautifulbaka07 2 years ago
Nice. =]
Calimouse3 2 years ago