Please rate and comment, this took forever to make! Its finally here! READ THIS!!! OR U WILL BE CONFUSSED!!! Alright, it starts out as a dream. Beast Boy dreams of Raven and that she has reached Deaths Gate. He tries to make her turn around but she can't. She says goodbye and then she dies. Beast Boy is horrified by this. But its only a dream. He wakes up and decides to keep on looking for Raven. Then Robin contacts him. Robin tells Beast Boy to stay and wait for the rest of the Titans. Beast Boy doesn't want to because he really wants to just find Raven and not let her die. Robin is annoyed by this but then after Starfire calms him down decide to catch up with Beast Boy later. Later Beast Boy is lost and is wondering where Raven is. Raven hears his thoughts and tries to guide him to her. She can only do it now because he is closer to her. Her powers are wanning. He hears her tell him that he must go through the Pit of Darkness. But in there is where Ravens Darkside is. After Raven leaves Beast Boy he incounters Ravens Darkside. Raven realizes this because for a moment her second set of eyes apear and are red. She wants to help Beast Boy but can't. When she is trying to find away, a Servant of Death appears (SLADE IS NOT THE SERVANT OF DEATH, ITS JUST HE WAS THE ONLY ONE THAT LOOKS LIKE ONE AND WHO HURTS RAVEN) and fights Raven. He then puts a spell on Raven so that the damage Beast Boy does on her Darkside will hurt Raven. Then after Raven is beging for the pain to stop, the Servant decides to try to break Beast Boy. He knows that Raven and Beast Boy can hear there thoughts but decides to show the pain Raven has felt in her life with the Titans. This angers Beast Boy and then Ravens Darkside taunts him by saying how she wishes to see Raven suffer. Then it ends for this part.
The reason this took a while to make was because i had a case of Writers block!
Part 9 comming soon!
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*sigh* ok. first of all, FANTASTIC! this is the best one I've seen yet. of course i haven't seen part 9 yet. that's next. but like i said in another comment, your depiction of raven is flawed. a fierce argument would break out between raven and beast boy when she spoke to him, raven telling him to turn back. then she'd cave and tell him where to go, but she would NEVER beg like that. you've got her begging for the pain to stop. wouldn't happen. sorry, I'm a critic hehe, but LOVED IT!!!
lysjocksan 2 years ago
im glad u like it, as for ur statement about raven (i do apperciate ur view) the beginning is like showing how raven is facing her fate (sort of like the way she faces it in The End part 1) as for when she is helping him, she is afraid that she won't see him again. which is painful for her. as for the actual physical pain, people do have a point where the pain is too much and they beg for it to stop.
TwilightMarkedRaven 2 years ago
when is part 9 coming???? I can't wait :)
confizzledworld 2 years ago 2
part 9 is out!
TwilightMarkedRaven 2 years ago
i really want to see part 9....i looove your series I wish the creators of Teen Titans would make this into real episodes....It's really really good :)
confizzledworld 2 years ago
thanks!
TwilightMarkedRaven 2 years ago