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Uploaded by on May 3, 2010

In this part I will talk about everything I felt was wrong in episode 1 of my book.

Feel free to discussion whats been read as well as knowledge on writing in general. Hopefully it will help other young writers who see this.

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  • thanks for the advice Daniel! I use it when editing my (currently in progress) novel.q

  • Long sentences are gold as long as you keep flow in them. I mean "flow" like in music - a rhythm that supports natural breathing, spaces between words, not necessary using punctuation but with carefully choosing words. At least that's like I see this.

    Nice video, keep them coming, I'm definetly going to listen to rest of your novel ;-)

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