Long sentences are gold as long as you keep flow in them. I mean "flow" like in music - a rhythm that supports natural breathing, spaces between words, not necessary using punctuation but with carefully choosing words. At least that's like I see this.
Nice video, keep them coming, I'm definetly going to listen to rest of your novel ;-)
thanks for the advice Daniel! I use it when editing my (currently in progress) novel.q
SilverHeretic 1 year ago
Long sentences are gold as long as you keep flow in them. I mean "flow" like in music - a rhythm that supports natural breathing, spaces between words, not necessary using punctuation but with carefully choosing words. At least that's like I see this.
Nice video, keep them coming, I'm definetly going to listen to rest of your novel ;-)
ShephardReborn 1 year ago