Nick's Story; 24

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mandostarr
August 30, 2009

Her big brown eyes glistened with tears brimming over the edge; tears rolled down my already red cheeks. She wiped away one of my tears, her thumb rubbing my cheek. I felt her hot breath hitting my neck as she moved closer to me, crawling into my lap. Her arms locked around my neck, her legs wrapped themselves around my waist. I put my hand on her thigh, her head layed on my shoulder. I caressed her forehead, gently pressing my forehead against hers. Her mouth formed a small O as if she was ready to talk, no sound from her lips. My other hand was wrapped around her, softly rubbing her back.
We held onto each other, neither of us saying a word. I was lost for words; once again, she left me completely speechless. Neither of us said a word, yet somehow we said everything. We understood each other's silence, in a way I don't even understand; words would ruin our moment. There was nothing to say, everything was already understood. Everything we could say, goes without saying. I wanted to tell her everything I was thinking, I couldn't even open my mouth to speak.

"Don't leave." Her voice was barely audible. I shook my head no once.

"Mommy says to come downstair for breakfast." Frankie said when he walked in, ruining our moment. Selena slowly moved off me, my arm never leaving her waist.

I watched her as she ate. She didn't eat most of the foods, only the grapefruit. I cleaned the plate, she looked down and poked at the food with her fork. She sighed, pushing her plate towards me. I stared at her curiously.

"Healthy." She said one word that explained it all. I glanced down at the plate of food; bacon, sausage, and doughnuts.

"Orange juice?" I asked her. She shook her head no, resulting in more strands of hair falling out of her messy bun. Wrapping both of her arms around my one arm, leaning against me. I kissed the side of her head, moving some hair out of her eyes.

"I want to die." She whisphered to me. I moved her off of me, sitting her on the chair. I walked away from her, not looking back. I left the house, slamming the door shut. Tears of anger came to my eyes as I got in my car and drove away from everything I once loved. I drove for hours until I felt far enough away, I ended up somewhere in Maine, I started in California. I found a cheap hotel and payed for two weeks ahead of time.

I needed to get away from her, before she left me.

-

shortest episode in the history of youtube writers, yes.
worst writing since cavemen wrote on cavewalls, yes.

sorry.sorry.sorry.
i didn't post the marathon.
i didn't post at all in a week.
oh and,i have writers block to the max.
just grand.
that's sarcasm hun.

i want to complain about the number of comments i get,
i wish i could.
but every time i try,
i realize i deserve what i get.
:l

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this is so awesome. i dont even know what to type. i agree with everyone here that says you are awesome. cause you are awesome. like totally awesome. if they dont say that you're awesome. they suck. unlike you. because you are awesome. the awesomest in the whole wide world. you should make a book someday. because you are awesome. totally awesome. xD

P.S. you are awesome.

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this is one of the best written stories on youtube. Different than those other nelena stories. Just Amazing!!!!!

mandostarr (1 month ago) Show Hide

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thank you so much, this just made my day :) i love you.

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While reading this i was thinking if he tries to get away from her again then what if something happens to her i mean i know that HIV takes a long time to fully process and kill you but still......

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that was great!

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OMJ! Please let him b safe!! Nice ep by the way! :)

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Awesome!!! It was awesome!!!:):}:]

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ohh man that was so good whens next one

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that was awsome u deserve a subscribe

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