*click More to see details and lyrics* Please leave a comment :) This is one of many poems I have written over the last few years since I was a little girl and started writing them. I am considering compiling them into a book for publishing, so please I would love to have your constructive feedback. This poem is set to a song by Evanescence, my fave band, called "Anywhere". Thanks!
If you would like the lyrics to the poem I wrote in this video, here they are:
Lovely are you, so beautiful my breath is stolen from me, and I am in awe of you. Of how so completely you fill me up and wisk me away to a place of reality where it is only you and I, of oneness and unspoken word yet much is said and shared. The lights in my eyes dance for you, they reflect what is inside beheld for you through darkness and day, from one to the next, and I am submissive. For this and more, I cannot deny where you take me, for I wish to go with you through valley and mountains, I would stay. Can this not be a dream, one I have had for so long, that I thought was lost for all eternity, right here in front of me. A vision of beauty you are, your arms wrap around me as a blanket, such warmth there I cannot help but collapse into you, where I never would leave. The mere sound of your voice sends me riveting through space and time, falling as a star about to shed its light, and take in your own, to join in tomorrows yet to be seen. And your touch, how it excites me and sends chills through me as shocks, awakening within me what never before touched. For but one as you are, and none thereafter you, shall ever be, this I know and yet with none I desire more, can this be. Your skin on mine, how that feels as silk to me, my body reacts in ecstasy at first touch, and I close my eyes and lose myself in you completely. Such sweet surrender you behold and I die to myself inside, for tis you that completes me, and makes me new. To feel you in my soul, that is where you lie, and I keep you forever as a treasure hidden from the world, you are mine and I am yours. A place where none can taint or tear, or journey for it is for us alone, an escape to each other where for once we can be where we long to be, and none other can steal away such bliss. My sunrise, my sunset, all I am breathes from you, and you from I, to lock ourselves away into the other where tis not seen but from us, solitude as strands of gold intertwined, weak alone but strength together, never ending and always beginning, a perfect circle we are. You are so beautiful to me, my beloved, let me behold you and drink you in so deeply to become me, so that I am satisfied til next moment I crave. Til each moment, for whether with you or apart, tis you I long for, only you my passion chases from, a completeness as we compliment each other, and reciprocate all that is within. My thirst for you is never satisfied, for each sweetened height brings a new distance, rolling together in motion speaking the unspoken in touch and caress. To look into your gaze and behold myself gazing back at me reflected there, I would for eternity remain until tasting the sweetness of your lips with mine, I would whisper my secrets to you again and again. I would devour you with my touch, and savour you with my kiss, overtaking you as we fall into the other, swirling as winds in the storms of this night, for it is ours. And endless ones after, always.
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Wow that was incredible. I really felt your words. I could have guessed it would be an Evanescence song hehe, but it went together great with the poem. I can't wait to see the next one :)
Debility81 2 years ago
Awesome, as an aspiring writer, that's so important to me to know you guys can feel my poems, they come to life for you. Thank you so much for your comment!
poeticone2812009 2 years ago
As always I'm amazed by your words, I am speechless with so much to say, where to begin is the hard part. You have a way with words that stupifies me and knocks me back. You are magnificent. I love the song and You did an awesome job ! =) Keep it going !
mnmonkey101406 2 years ago 2
Stupefied huh...love that word, gonna use it in another poem which is posted here already =P Thank you for such a touching comment, I'm so happy you enjoyed this.
poeticone2812009 2 years ago