A decent attempt. I do like the piano stuff but watch out for what I call Two-Minute-Itis. That's where the song just magically ends at 2 minutes. What this usually means is that there is not enough music to make a full song and that you maybe need to add another movement or change to the song to lengthen in to a good 3-4 minutes.
Also, Shemassault is right, you should try at least adding some reverb. Reverb makes pianos sound real. Not too much, just the right amount. Check out my works.
keep it up, to make it more natural i'd add reverb and nuke it with compression. dirty it up a little, make it more natural sounding and you got yourself a really nice piece. btw, i see what you did there, sampling the crash from Chemial Brothers!
A decent attempt. I do like the piano stuff but watch out for what I call Two-Minute-Itis. That's where the song just magically ends at 2 minutes. What this usually means is that there is not enough music to make a full song and that you maybe need to add another movement or change to the song to lengthen in to a good 3-4 minutes.
Also, Shemassault is right, you should try at least adding some reverb. Reverb makes pianos sound real. Not too much, just the right amount. Check out my works.
ShogaNinja 2 years ago
keep it up, to make it more natural i'd add reverb and nuke it with compression. dirty it up a little, make it more natural sounding and you got yourself a really nice piece. btw, i see what you did there, sampling the crash from Chemial Brothers!
Shemassault 2 years ago