A nice song: "beyond the ocean"

written and performed by Radamés.
lyrics:

Beyond the ocean

I saw the sun this morning
But it wasn't as bright as i remeber it
Clouds seemed to want to hide it
Away from me
Oh night, please, don't take the sun away

How i wish i had a bridge
Over the ocean
So i could follow my sun
Beyond the night
Like a whisper i hear your voice
Calling me there to come to you
Throughout the night and space

Oh beyound the ocean
And i feel my soul is running to you

And now i'm here on this lonely shore
watching the sunset
Just wishing i could see you
Just wishing i could hold you
On this dark night
And i can only hope for another day

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radamanthys@ig.com.br

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[radames83]

thanks for your coment! i have to agree, the recording and the performance are not as good as they could be, heheheh. It's a homemade recording, and maybe you're right, it gets a little high for me at certain point hehehe. I hope to make a decent recording of this song some day, it's special for me. I'm glad you like it! thanks!

[iangate]

I really like your song. :) I found it to be very soothing.

I do, however, have a little bit of constructive criticism. During the chorus, I think that you try to sing a bit too high. Your voice is good, but it sounds a little obnoxious after it surpasses a certain pitch.

Now, that's nothing to be ashamed of. I have the same problem myself. I think that with practice, you could probably learn to sing well even that high. Just keep at it. :)

[radames83]

Valeu mesmo pelo comentario! muito legal da sua parte ;)

Beijão!

[miraua1]

muito agradável ;-)