A Dream is a Wish...and a lil Disney rant
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when you play your songs even with just the melody on the piano, it can help with your intonation by A MILE. I know this because I study music.
So..... I hope you didn't mind this critique.
I'm just trying to help out a prospective musician.
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continued again (hope you can take the heat lol)
no matter how your heart is grieving
In "no matter" the note steps are supposed be 6th, flat 6th and back to 6th again, but you sang that as 5-6-5.
If you keep on believing
you sang the if you keep on be- as 4-4-4-3-1 when it's simple as 5-4-3-2-1 sequence.
Now besides that you have very tasteful romantic vibratos which I just adore and your intro to the song was very good. Practice with the piano a lot especially your songs and stuff
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continued
"lose" was a bit flat
Whatever you wish for you give
You sang "Whatever "as a natural 6th when it's supposed to be a flat 2nd
Have faith in your dreams and someday here we come back to "A" and "and" is supposed to be a natural 7th again and you sang that as a root.
Your rainbow will come smiling through
In the "smiling", the "ing" part of the word and the "smile" part of the whole word are supposed to be whole step differece and you sang that as a half step.
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ok. You have a pretty good voice quality, but I'm gonna tell you the mistakes on the song.
A Dream is a wish.... your(that "your" is supposed to be a natural 7th and you were singing the root)heart makes
When your fast asleep (The "fast" is a sharp 5th and you were singing it as a natural 6th)
In dreams you will lose your heartaches
(the step between the words "you" and "will" is a half-step which is from flat 6th to natural 6th and you were singing that as a whole step. And "lose" was
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wow your a really good singer. real talent. go for canadian/american idol lol
but I will say this: You sing WAY BETTER THAN MILEY.
pong224 2 years ago
I wasn't trying to sound exactly like the song itself...but I do appreciate ur input u know what ur talking about it looks like. Though this was just goofing around I just sing for fun ^_^
Boogity4u 2 years ago