Kina Grannis Co-Write First Verse
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part 3
it's not the bricks that make this house a home
it's not the shoes that you tell where we've roamed
but it's in our love and in the stories
they show us who we are
and they'll bring us together from so far
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part 2 cuz it's not the brick that makes this house a home and it's not the shoes that you tell where we've roamed but it's in our love and in the stories they show us who we are and they'll bring us together from so far so travel on little solder and tell the story far and wide of house with out bricks and a family's shoeless ride were love is over flowing and the pages never end and no matter how poor we are the journey has just begun so remember yes it's true
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part 1 it's not the brick that makes this house a home it's not the shoes that you tell where we've roamed it's in our love and in the stories they show us who we are and they'll bring us together from so far and yes it's true our journey bleeds through the pages with a road that seems to long and far but that doesn't stop our hearts from beating and that doesn't stop and souls from needing all of each other just the way we are
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this song could be in a movie* but it could be a movie too lol
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they may not have a home of brick but they still have each other and they have there unbreakable love for one another and they may not have shoes but they still have a journey and a story to tell and that story and that journey shows the world just who they are a family with out a home but with each other a family without shoes but with a story to tell and a heart of love that brings them together even if there far away... :) this song could be a movie.... :d
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ok so we have no brick for a home but home is were the heart is and we have no shoes but we still roam and the love we have in our hearts that's were our home is our home is in our love and our home is in our stories and that's what shows people who we are and that's also what brings together from far away and it hit me this song is for the homeless family's
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i just had a very cool cool idea! ok so i was thinking about this and yes I'm back! lol ok so as you sang "it's not the brick that makes this house a home" i touched the wall in our house and repeated the those words and as you sang " it's not the shoes that tell where we've roamed" i tapped my shoes on the ground and repeated the words and then as you sang " it's in the love and in our stories" "they show us who we are" "they'll bring us together from so far" i repeated those words and thought
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@IamRafe yes it'll come with time i suppose but sometimes i just wish time it's self would hurry up lol :P
you need to make this into a poem or a new song!
kiekie84 1 year ago
@kiekie84 I've added to it some...just a couple lines...but I'm not set on the lines I've got and kind of stuck right now with it. It's a work in progress.
IamRafe 1 year ago
Ah.. I really like your lyrics. It's a shame that you didnt get in :( But hey, dont lose hope! There'll be other more chances to do something like this again :)
hidude8 1 year ago
@hidude8 I've had so much positive feedback from this video. Thank you so much!
IamRafe 1 year ago
not bad
jayquan15ify 1 year ago
@jayquan15ify not good either! haha...thanks for the kind of compliment! :)
IamRafe 1 year ago