@ClockworkOrangeDroog Remember, it's (almost) never the audience's fault. You'll get one or two who don't get your jokes (my roommate's girlfriend has no sense of humour) - but usually you can make even a cold audience enjoy your set. What I do is stick my hands forwards when I start and they move by themselves for the rest, usually helps loads.
I loved your jokes dude, add some bigger movements and you will kill every time you do the set!
Your jokes are actually surprisingly decent, but your delivery is just awful. No energy at all. Delivery is pretty important in comedy! Why are your hands in your pants??? Take them out, wave em around, yell at people! This is supposed to be entertainment here... You come off as the funny guy at the office who is telling jokes around the water cooler... c'mon brosef.. you can do better
No Jbidnis is right on the mark here. Steven Wright has a totally different style and doesn't need to show emotion for his jokes. If this guy had done more act outs and didn't sound much like a robot it would have been really good because his material wasn't bad at all.
a very like-able guy. some good jokes.
beatlegreg07 1 year ago
@ClockworkOrangeDroog Remember, it's (almost) never the audience's fault. You'll get one or two who don't get your jokes (my roommate's girlfriend has no sense of humour) - but usually you can make even a cold audience enjoy your set. What I do is stick my hands forwards when I start and they move by themselves for the rest, usually helps loads.
I loved your jokes dude, add some bigger movements and you will kill every time you do the set!
LieutenantSmith 1 year ago
you suck loads
asd910ddm 1 year ago
Your jokes are actually surprisingly decent, but your delivery is just awful. No energy at all. Delivery is pretty important in comedy! Why are your hands in your pants??? Take them out, wave em around, yell at people! This is supposed to be entertainment here... You come off as the funny guy at the office who is telling jokes around the water cooler... c'mon brosef.. you can do better
Sviolinist 2 years ago
Really funny stuff. Keep going with this. I agree, audience was pretty shitty.
ClockworkOrangeDroog 2 years ago
No Jbidnis is right on the mark here. Steven Wright has a totally different style and doesn't need to show emotion for his jokes. If this guy had done more act outs and didn't sound much like a robot it would have been really good because his material wasn't bad at all.
DavidValley 3 years ago
That was great what a shitty audience.
timoth88 3 years ago
Hahahaha. Hilarious. Great talent. Should have been more laughs in the background though.
xawinterofashx 3 years ago
i liked it i laughed my ass off in my office today people were looking at me funny but it was hilarious
atrainrev 3 years ago
somebody tell al borland to shut it
alapponese 3 years ago