Live-in for Literacy
Uploader Comments (danepstein138)
All Comments (4)
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hey good job man keep getting the word out there, we need more ppl like u in this world... gl to the cause, peace
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ok, no splash shot, no visual official introduction, there is no information provided to further donate to the cause, nobody cares about the two, the cause is what is important ....I guess. The reporter is not so engaging and besides the opening shot which is ok the rest is too personal. You need to be a bit more professional and include more people.... thus why I mention the budget. A bit more organization is needed.
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wow, really uninformantive, unimaginative and not such a great video. I am not hating on your skills, I think you need more funiding and a full team of reporters and more bruhahaha in order to make this worthy cause into an event rather than posting it as a real time and making it see really dull. You are not controlling time and the video sucks really bad.
thanks for the criticism. i agree i should have focused more on the cause itself. i just found their dynamic really interesting. im still learning so keep up the constructive criticism.
danepstein138 2 years ago