Survivor (A Jemi Story) EP.1
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awesome!!!!but how could she go home and it was burnd. and why is she happy her dad just died!!
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aww poor demi but she dident sound that upset
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for a wile i was thinking the random bad dude was satan!
"We made a deal!"
"Yes satan! I know but-"
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Wow...
This is kind of...dumb??? I don't want to be to mean or anything, but I was sorely disappointed by this "story". It lacked something...I don't know exactly what but it did. Demi should have been more upset. And she shouldn't have told Joe the whole story, if she just met him. That was sort if retarded.
I severely hope that you are not to offended by this. I'm only expressing my opinion.
Perhaps in the future you can write better...stories?
Best wishes,
Alexa
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this made me cry
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OH UMMM WHY SHE HAPPY?
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that was retartedd xP
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that was really good! except when joe giggled haha it kind of creeeped me out :-l.....................hah
awesome are you a girl or boy just want to know awesome
littleangela234 3 years ago
lol i'm a girl
SurvivorStoryJemi 3 years ago