.hack Roots Fandub (Re-made) episode 1 part 1

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Okay, here I am once again with a new, remade .hack roots episode 1.

Critiques are welcome, but only constructive critisism! Anything other than that will be deleted

Cast:

PK 1: LG65
PK 2: Sayaka
Haseo: Rakansen
Ovan: Zeix
Phyllo: Shift
Tabby: Aeremonster
Shino: My sister

((.hack belongs to the rightful owner. Along with the music. This is made by fans for fans!))

Category:

Film & Animation

Tags:

• .hack
• roots
• fandub
• episode

[HirokoShiroko]

Thanks for your comment Zeix! ^_^

[Zeix36]

Sorry, I had to be terse in my comment. I had 8 characters left. :P

Overall, people did a pretty good job, but nothing exceptional, if I can be a little bit blunt/honest. I notice some people had lower-quality mics which brought down the production overall. Words to the wise, headsets = VERY poor choice in voice-acting microphones.

Hope to work with you guys again, I'd be more than happy to be in future episodes as Ovan or any other characters. ^_^

[Zeix36]

Criticisms for everyone.

LG65: Good, but very short line, so not much to expand on.

Sayaka: Not bad, but she needed to sound more proud of her evil deeds.

Rakansen: No offense, but I wouldn't choose this kind of voice for Haseo at all. He sounded really bored and out-of-it.

Zeix: I'm not really one to knock my own work, but I think I could have been a lot deeper.

Phyllo: Good, but a little bit too old sounding.

Tabby: Not bad. Good giggles.

Sister: Pretty good, but very breathy and quiet.