Personal Narrative WIP

DISCLAIMER: This narrative was written before I interviewed my mom for the facts. Some of this information is NOT correct, but because it is what I believed to be true for so long I left the misinformation in my personal narrative intact (for the most part). Throughout the documentary this incorrect information is disproved and corrected.

Anyway, here's the first 3 minutes of my 22 minute narrative (as it stands right now, this documentary is going to be long D: .....DAMMIT....I need to work on cutting it down). I've been working on it all day =_=....do you have any idea how unsatisfying it is to work on something all day....to only have it last for THREE MINUTES? It sucks....

But anyway....feedback/criticism/etc. are welcome--encouraged in fact. Thanks in advanced.

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[TheRainbowBallroom]

This was done nicely! (:

I really was entertained! Good job!