A Twilight Poem

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Uploaded by on Aug 5, 2008

A poem about Twilight that I wrote put to music with accompanying video clips.

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  • You are an amazing writer!

    you should be famous lol

    i love this soo much! :D

  • thank u so much. that's actually my dream so when u said that it put a big smile on my face. <3

  • my poem is soooo weak compared to that:

    As I looked into those topaz eyes,

    their eyes a faded golden,

    the whole world seemed to melt away,

    and all I wanted was to hold him.

    His skin so white, it shimmered,

    felt like a thousand ice cubes,

    he gently held me in his arms,

    and whispered, "I love you."

    -Kellen D.

  • thanks for reviewing and btw ur poem is good. i liked the first half of the poem. not sure that the last half continued the flow properly but it was still very pretty. keep writing <3

  • I have read so many poems about twilight but yours was by far the best! And I really loved the video! GOOD JOB! :)

  • thanx. and the song is called Twilight by Vanessa Carlton. :P fitting rite?

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  • wow

  • lahved it. it was rly nice

  • This was amazing :)

  • AMAZING! I love it!

  • Great poem!!!

  • i love your poem xD you should

    do moree !

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