The Jungle of Death:
The Doctor lands on a Jungle Planet finding a lost captain who's ship has crashed. The Captain says he has a lost member of the crew. They find the lost member who has a rash on his face. But most Importantly who is responsible for the rash?
@RassilonsArmy Yeah
JuddonPlatoon 1 year ago
could be longer and could do it in stop motion
danbroad9 1 year ago
3/5. a qoog story, nice plot, but as said below a stop motion would look better
VirtualDalek 1 year ago
@JuddonPlatoon Same here.
RassilonsArmy 1 year ago
@RassilonsArmy Oh no I know I'm just saying that I would give it 5 if it wasn't for the arm
JuddonPlatoon 1 year ago
@JuddonPlatoon Don't get me wrong, I enjoyed the story and would too give 4/5.
Jamie
RassilonsArmy 1 year ago
I agree with Jamie about the hand and arm but I enjoyed it so I'm giving it 4/5
JuddonPlatoon 1 year ago
The story is good, but the only thing that makes it unrealistic is the lack of animation. While animating does take longer and requires editing, it makes everything look 'real'. Alot of the time your hand/arm could be seen in shot.
I'm not having a go at you, I'm just suggesting ways in which you could improve on this. All in all it's a good story and I'm looking forward to the next part. Well Done!
Jamie
RassilonsArmy 1 year ago