The letter an original song by me

I know its cheesy, but i like cheesy songs, especially when they are sharp and cheddar.

The letter:

I wrote you a letter, im afraid to send.
Youve got me all worried, its all just pretend.
But i keep complaining that i never win.
So i wrote you this letter so i can begin

Life will get better, it just takes a few bloody miles
If i didnt feel like this sometimes, I wouldnt know the right time to smile.

Youve got me all tied up, left in a knot
come back and untie me, youre all that ive got.
forget all my baggage, youre all that i need
Ill go anywhere, if its you that i see

Life will get better, it just takes a few bloody miles
If i didnt feel like this sometimes, I wouldnt know the right time to smile.

Im waiting to tell you I wrote you this letter,
If i could be with you this life could get better.

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• kira
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• trash metal
• alternative indie
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• acoustic
• death note
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[folksinger91]

Great song, Kira, I think I'm gonna sit down and learn it =)

[kira655321]

@folksinger91 that would be super cool. I never write songs!

[adrianouu]

i like your sooooong!!!!!!

is so amazing! :O!!

i like really hahaha n.n!!

im imagine with more sounds

but anyway is like

hey! and what is name song?

[kira655321]

the letter.

[CommissionerG]

I love that little finger style jig you do; it's a very nice lofty, but mellow, sound. I love finger style...but I'm awful at it. :-(

Good stuff.

[euthly]

@cardboardgiraffe29 agreed!!  Well said.

[folksinger91]

@kira655321 The intro riff is very catchy, and it has a good bass line, very well written :)

[cardboardgiraffe29]

@euthly a cello would be brilliant for this song. the timbre of certain string instruments reflect lyrical content just right, and for this, a deep bassy string would be perfect

[cardboardgiraffe29]

could you please send me the chords/tab?

[HowardFair]

Get an agent

[euthly]

keep going no matter what. Groovy song, maybe some cello and a snare would be cool accompaniment. You are talented and unique, and that's quite a combo.