People Who Need To DIE!
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that video was pointless
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Yes, I realize that.
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He gave you constructive criticism. Take it for what it is and try to learn from it.
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Thanks. And yeah, I'm just gonna assume that last remark was just a roast. No, it can't give you AIDS. It also can't leave you with a $500 abortion bill. :P
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Fuckin character limit i didn't think you'd get back so quickly...ne way yea I'm not sure if i have or not, but I'll check more shit out later. Good luck.
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Maybe instead try cutting the shit that isn't new or inventive, and making your punchlines shorter with more of a bite. Cut back on the meandering details of blood and gore. Not that blood and gore aren't awesome and funny, but the way you present it it quickly loses momentum and eventually tapers off. Just giving feedback. So yea, work on that. Or disregard this altogether go fuck yourself with shotgun. Hey, at least rock salt can't give you AIDS.
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Well, thanks for giving it another shot. The violent depictions/shock value gags usually don't happen; ep. 9 is a break from the usual routine.
Maybe you've watched the other episode, I dunno. Nontheless, thanks for keeping an open mind, anyway.
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Not my fault you don't get my humor.
Well actually, After revisiting your video, I gotta say it's a more genuine attempt then i thought. Around maybe...50% is pretty original, and it has a very carlin-esque vibe to it...but really that kinda just makes it worse. The buildup is, at times, decent, but where it consistently falls on its face EVERY TIME is the delivery. You come across as a loud and trying too hard to come up with creative vulgarities/violent depictions 4 shock value rather than legit humor.
12GaugeSteel 2 years ago 3
fuck this! * watches sailor moon related videos*
xypowerpop 2 years ago 3