This is my persuasive speech for my May term Oral Communication class. I would like to have some feedback regarding how I can improve and encouragement. I know that I am somewhat cut off from the camera angle, not my fault, I didn't want to block my powerpoint.
very good persuasive speech, coming from a person with a P.H.D in English, although the pauses and overuse of "ummm" takes from your overall presentation.
delapazjonathan 4 months ago
Ummm..... Epic ummm FAIL! Ummmm that is all for now *Kanye umm Shrug* ummm
tashaakalilmama23 6 months ago
um, your instructor, um has taught umm, alot, umm of good speach umm techniniques
5694mark 10 months ago
you say "um" a lot, also try not to read from the paper that much
spd19 11 months ago