Yeah, the fades seem to be creating some glitches that are pretty distracting. Even though the frames are dark, the light is rather well-controlled. I think your commercial was the only one that I could completely picture in my head when you pitched it. It's short with a clever and straightforward punchline. I'm not too crazy about the effect of changing the light position in real-time at the end, but other than that very well done!
I still think this commercial is genius. I liked how you overall filmed it. Some of the shots are a little dark, which I'm sure were on purpose. I agree with Alex, you probably don't need the fades between the first shots. I also think the ending does need to be changed. Put it in the streets maybe?
Love the feeling of the whole piece, but the ending really needs to be changed. It does not fit in with the rest of the piece. I like the idea of haveing the pepsi at the same setting and having the crime scene in the distance. In some parts it was little too dark.
cool commercial! I don't think you need to fade in and out between the first couple of shots. It needs to be lit a little more. I also think the last shot with the pepsi should have been shot in the same setting at the scene of the crime. Over all I think it was cool.
GOOD JOB COLIN!!!!
deedee2010ful 10 months ago
PLEASE PUT ON VIMEO PER CLASS INSTRUCTION
Fun piece
Love the concept
Let's reshoot the product shots - they are a little dark
Really like where this is going
MarcRuiz 10 months ago
Yeah, the fades seem to be creating some glitches that are pretty distracting. Even though the frames are dark, the light is rather well-controlled. I think your commercial was the only one that I could completely picture in my head when you pitched it. It's short with a clever and straightforward punchline. I'm not too crazy about the effect of changing the light position in real-time at the end, but other than that very well done!
-Erik
ilikeyourbeat 10 months ago
I still think this commercial is genius. I liked how you overall filmed it. Some of the shots are a little dark, which I'm sure were on purpose. I agree with Alex, you probably don't need the fades between the first shots. I also think the ending does need to be changed. Put it in the streets maybe?
stefaniaxramirez 10 months ago
Love the feeling of the whole piece, but the ending really needs to be changed. It does not fit in with the rest of the piece. I like the idea of haveing the pepsi at the same setting and having the crime scene in the distance. In some parts it was little too dark.
transfan1345 10 months ago
cool commercial! I don't think you need to fade in and out between the first couple of shots. It needs to be lit a little more. I also think the last shot with the pepsi should have been shot in the same setting at the scene of the crime. Over all I think it was cool.
dfwmymf23 10 months ago
This is really good Colin. The settings are fantastic and very real. I think its a little dark in some spots, but overall well done!
dentistjammer 10 months ago