(original) Love Denied (enjoy the taste)

[lyrics]
Leave me now, the lessons learned
you denied me, it's your turn
watch me now, rise above
no more drowning, in twisted love

your pathetic lies
enjoy the taste of love denied
stand up and face your last goodbye
enjoy the taste of love denied

Regret the past, nothings changed
except I'm stronger, and your the same
leave me now, lesson learned
you denied me, it's your turn

your pathetic lies
enjoy the taste of love denied
stand up and face your last goodbye
enjoy the taste of love denied

[notes]
Video footage is from when I was writing this song. Doesn't match up perfect. I hope my production skills make up for that.

Oswlek taught me about music challenges. I tried to write a happy song because I truly am grateful and happy. But, I failed. Oh well, I prefer the shadows anyway!

All music, production, mastering, ect ect done by little old me.

This is the longest song I have ever uploaded. Forgive me for that, self serving bastard that I am ;)

~Raz

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[mystonicrecords]

the vocal is very good.

piano as well

my only suggestion would be verb on the snare, and a different string patch.

[mishrathium]

The snare gated more would have been sweet - agreed! Thank you for the feedback ;) ~Raz

[shroomage34]

Self-serving, I think not!! Great song dude, I assume another personal message delivered with lots of emotion and power!! Nice job.

Josh

[mishrathium]

thank you brother. And you did catch a personal message inside this. Nicely done! ~Raz

[avenger038]

awesome song, how im feeling at the moment , gota get it released !!!!!!!!!

excellent

[ruth7784]

Amazingly passionate and emotive vocals! Love it! :-) X

[MsEllieJ]

I just love your sound... But you already know that. :) "No more drowning in twisted love" Your lyrics are also great as usual. 5 Shimmering Stars. BTW.... I've been trying to write a "happy" song too... and even though I'm a happy person - I just can't quite seem to get there.. yet. :) The shadows are comfortable.

[onewomanandsomesongs]

I'm with Scott here....dark and rich....the best kind of songs! You're just so talented, Raz...what can I say? :) Another five star tune.

Janet

[cbrb40]

Wow now that's intense and raw and powerful Raz my bro!! I always find myself using these words to describe your songs! :)) And believe me that's a good thing! You songs and singing can touch many people feeling all kinds of emotions because you bring them out best of anyone.I love the anger in your vocals,the roughness and it's like getting it out of your system,screaming out the pain. Lennon did that so well especially on his first solo album. I love the song lyrics singing,you rock! Million *

[cadwalladee]

Dark and rich - Nice work Raz!

[LadyWeaver]

What a wonderfully crafted and intense song...magic...You make the shadows seem beautifully enticing ;-)

[017mls]

Excellent.