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The next morining, Keely was awake looking up at the ceiling. Sara and Tiffany were already downstairs eating breakfast. Sara came up stairs to check on Keely.
Sara- Good, your finally awake. Why are your eyes so red?
Keely didn't say a word. She got up and went downstairs to start to eat breakfast. She poured herself some Co-Co Puffs and Milk and sat down and just kind of twirled her spoon in her bowl Tiffany and Sara exchanged looks.
Tiffany-Is everything alright Keely?
Keely-No. Eveythings horrible. Nothings going right. Everythings a mess. I don't know what to do.
Keely ran back upstairs.
Sara-Who peed in her Co-Co Puffs?
Sara and Tiffany both finished breakfast and put their dishes away. They both walked back up to the bedroom and saw Keely packing up her clothes.
Tiffany- Holy mess! What the freak do you think your doing?!
Keely- I'm packing up, leaving, I'm gone.
Sara- What?! Why?!
Keely-'Cause last night I went to go get some water and I heardmy parents talking, and I-- I think their going to send me back to the orphanage.
Tiffany-*Laughs* Somebody had to much drama in their ceral this moring.
Keely gave her the I'm not kidding look.
Tiffany-*stops laughing* Your not kidding, are you?
Keely- No.
Sara- Did they say that exactly?
Keely- Well, no, but they emplied it.
Sara- Then they might not be. Your parents aren't like that, Keels.
Keely- Yeah they are. How am I going to tell Nick?
Tiffany- To his face. We were just about to leave. C'mon
Keely- But wait! I'm not wearing any make up!
Tiffany-So! I look good, thats all that matters!
Keely- Great, now I have to tell him and look horrible while doing it.
The all leave to go tho JB's house. When they get there, they knock on the door. Keely is standing in the fron with her hair all messy and bad, and her pillow under her arm. The other two look some-what put together with their hair put up on pony-tails. Joe answered.
Joe-*Kinda laughing* Heyy...
Keely-*Walks in* Don't laugh at me. Like your hair loks any better.
Joe has an insulted look on his face, All of JB are in their Jammies and are playing vidoe games. The girls go over and sit on the couch. Sara finally says something.
Sara- Nick, Keely wnats to tell you someting.
Nick- Yeah?
Keely- Well, um... *fastly* I think my parents might be putting me back at the adoption center.
Nick, Joe, and Kevin's jaws dropped open.
Nick- What? I don't think I heard you right. It sounded like you said your parents are putting you back up for adoption.
Keely-You heard me right
Kevin-This is wacked
Joe-When did they tell you?
Keely- They didn't. I over heard them talking last night. They're going to tell me tommorrow.
Kevin- Did they say "Hey, I think we're going to put Keely up for adoption"
Keely-No. they didn't actually say it. They emplied it.
Nick- Keely, that doesn't mean they're giving you away. I mean, Your grandma could've died, or something.
Sara-Nick's right. You don't need to jump to conclusions. But, lets just enjoy today, and worry about tommorrow, well, tommorrow.
Keely- Your probally right. So, what do you guys want to do?
Joe- How about we just go chill at the mall?
Tiffany- Sounds good.
Keely- Um, can I go home and get ready first?
Joe- Yes, for the sake that is all good, and pure in this world, YES.
Keely- That was a yes or no answer. Not one where you explain your reasoning.
Joe-Well I get bonus poionts.
Keely-*rolls her eyes* C'mon guys.
Sara-Bye!!
Tiffany- See ya!
The girls walked out and headed back home to get ready.
Kevin- Do you guys seriously think that she's going back to the orphanage?
Joe- I don't think so.
Nick- I don't know, but I do know that her grandma didn't die, or else, she wouldn't be that upset. All I thnk is that she's not going to the orphanage, but she's not going to be around for much longer. Its a gut feeling, and you guys know how I am with my gut feelings.

Joe and Kevin look at eachother with "What if he's right?" looks. They all are scared. Maybe more scared than Keely.

Alright guys, I know the song has nothing to do with the story, but I love this song and I wanted to use it. If you don't know what it is, its "My Heart" by Tony Oller :)

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  • is there going to be more characters?

    just wondering

    i love this series,especially the songs

    when can you write the next episode?

    sorry i'm writing too mucho.

    anyways bye

    Love

    Annie Lee

  • Probally in Season 2. It shouldn't be long until it comes out, because I'm about to wrap up season 1. I'll post a video after I put out episode 10.

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  • omj tony oller sings better then i thought lol omj i wanna cry for keely and nick and joe and sara and kevn and tiffany lol all f them just cuz off keely lol

     poor story i love your story so far

  • i like the song 2

    i think it sets a good mood <3

  • ouch... when keely told joe about his hair when he answered the door. cold man but i live it (my mix between like and love)

  • OhmiGod! I have to know what happens to Keely!

  • LOVED IT! I wannt more love!!

    awesomee! can't wait!

  • omg! i CANT wait! im reallllly excited!

  • OMG!

    Write more pwease

    i can't believe Keely might go somewhere.

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